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Topic: I Am Not The Enemy
Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/15/08 08:07 AM

((((( Robert & Dena )))))

Life is a journey a journey you two souls have embarked on The road ahead is bright and within your souls you two shall soar ...

Hugs flowerforyou :heart:

Thank you so much Denise for your well wishes for Dena and me...and it is looking brighter.

feralcatlady's photo
Tue 01/15/08 06:13 PM
Very touching and profound Robert......

no photo
Tue 01/15/08 06:42 PM
Edited by Ghostrider2u on Tue 01/15/08 06:42 PM
Definately like the way you put it together wolfy.....nice peice!!!drinker drinker

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 01/15/08 07:28 PM
I can't believe how much a five minute write up can get so many great comments. I guess it was the emotion I was feeling at the moment for this one. Thanks ya'll for making me shine on this one.

Thanks Kitty...two profounds for one poem..boy that's a record for me.

Thanks Gar...I appreciate that comment...it didn't take much to put it together.

robinlynn42's photo
Tue 01/15/08 08:48 PM
good job
neatdrinker

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/15/08 11:08 PM


I Am Not The Enemy

The feelings I fight
In this battle of emotions,
My mind keeps swirling
With all these commotions.
Bitter thoughts and words
Of the past do dwell,
Keeping my guard up
Of the feelings that fell.

I am not the enemy
Of a war I fought,
The explosions of battle
That drained my thoughts.
Being a victor to overcome
What was a bitter past,
To walk in stride
To go forward at last.




((( R )))

kind of short for you but very poignant
i like it
just leave it in the past and follow the path you two have started

good one my friend



Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 01/16/08 12:07 AM
We all have off days Wolfeyes, but that's what makes us unmistakably human. Keep your head up brother and keep up the beautiful writing. :smile:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/16/08 05:58 AM
Thank you Robin...Thank you Faded...I appreciate the kind comments...

KC...yeah it was short and not myself...but it seems like it was one of my more powerful statements. I'm back to myself now. And thank for your wishes for Dena and I.

Dragoness's photo
Wed 01/16/08 09:43 AM
Good one Robertflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Wed 01/16/08 09:44 AM
wow Robert really good

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/16/08 01:58 PM
Thank you as always Barb....

And Pam...thanks sweetie, it's good to see you back.

Noden's photo
Wed 01/16/08 02:04 PM
Another nice read, Robert...drinker drinker smokin

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 01/21/08 07:37 AM

Another nice read, Robert...drinker drinker smokin

Thank you as always sweetie.

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