Another stream of words comes flowing from the pen
I look into my life,and it looks like rain again
but I won't close any windows,I'm letting the breeze come in
from time to time we all need that feeling again

Because I have learned that lonliness ain't as bad as it seems
and theres no one to tell me no or to shatter every dream
I don't want a touch I'll lose for every mistake I make
love is such a beautiful thing,but theres only so much I can take


I've played the part in which I swear was never me
and I swore never to change,thats another lie love believes
A failed romance was all I have ever learned from this
and endless resentment that began with just one kiss
And I told her she was beautiful..while others told her the same
but she never believed in me,and I don't believe in games
Love is more than an image,and thats something we must learn
when you base your desires on looks,by her personality you get burned

Okay...this poem ended with someone getting burned... a total horse
wreck dude.... upbeat please...!

I think that poem is beautiful.
Life is not always upbeat.
You just have to bloom where you are planted!

very beautiful words
and very deeply wrote
teardrop

AWESOME JT

Thank you so much/but Ontario is right (in a way)/"Alone" is not
upbeat,but it's not exactly negative (it's about accepting the
odds)..The character isn't (whining or getting all sappy) about being
alone.he's for once in his life going with it (true story on my
behalf)/as for the last line,well have you ever had a good look person
fuck you over (I have)...thanks again


and don't worry Ontario/I'll say it for you



HUH? What? Dude?