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Topic: Bringing the pain
Blackfox12 Joined Tue 12/18/07 Posts: 4330	Thu 01/10/08 10:49 AM
Bringing the pain on the other Line straight to my soul at times As it goes into my ear and straight To my head and right to my heart Those words you said just riped me apart This is why i look at that phone Nowadays with so much fear and Just hoping when it ring's it's Not you there on the other line Ready to bring the pain back into my life............ This is a old work of mine

captivatingsoul Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 11	Thu 01/10/08 10:51 AM
It may be old work of yours..but I think anyone can relate. It isn't always an ex..some times its family...giving us the pain.. Very thoughful.

deadpoet Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 197	Thu 01/10/08 11:02 AM
That was very beautiful.. I loved the last two lines.. simply amazing.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76470	Thu 01/10/08 11:04 AM
Old or not so many can relate

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Thu 01/10/08 11:06 AM
I'm right there with you bro, good things are in your friends, and I am one of them...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 01/10/08 11:21 AM


Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Thu 01/10/08 01:10 PM
That's why I don't answer my phone most of the time. Very nice.....

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Thu 01/10/08 01:13 PM


Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 01/10/08 11:21 PM
Nice write Blackfox. Maybe old, but never outdated.

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