I’ve looked in your eyes
Through your well honed disguised
And seen the person you are
You’ve shown me your tears
Your hopes your fears and
Cared for me from afar~
And as I grew,
Developed new and heart felt
Caring feelings,
With tumultuous heart,
My motions askew,
I knew that
I could love you~

I abandoned my sorrows
For dreams of tomorrows
That I hoped
Would encompass you,
And we walked this
Path slowly,
You and I,
And through it all I grew~
I let down my guard,
Left myself wide open,
And soon enough I knew,
That despite my protests,
My hardened stance,
That I had come to love you~

But now your path
Has detoured from mine,
And you’re turning from me
As you say goodbye,
There’s no comfort in sight,
Just long lonely nights
Void of you,
And I no longer can deny,
You haven’t yet left
But you’re really gone,
Taking nothing of me
But a few sad words,
And a pictured
Face to peer into~
A songstress, a woman,
Buried memory deep,
Looking back with
Eyes that see through,
A moment in time,
Between you and I,
A soft reminder that
I have loved you.

Phoenix
January 9, 2008

GREAT THANKS

You're welcome....

thank you

AWESOME WORK GIRL

Thank you sportie~

ok hey how many times do I have to say this...move on woman!!!!


it was fun but...

monkey got a new thing now

Ahhhhh....a deep, insightful, intelligent, well written critique analyzing the core of a woman's soul.

soft reminders can be so harsh

well written---wiz

Yeah....very harsh KC.....time doesn't necessarily heal all wounds....thank you

i know
i too am a member of the walking wounded....

And as a fyi

It was a joke I understood your pain and was not making light of it I was trying to make you smile, a monkey assuming the roll of the lover is funny in a satirical way

Did I spell anything wrong this time?

Aren't we all?

<<----checking her dictionary and thesaurous. Nope. Perfection.

Wow, I almost caught a tear. Very nice write MsWizard.