Topic: One false move.
Lily0923's photo
Wed 01/09/08 01:12 PM
I thought about you while drifting off to sleep last night.
Your fingertips touching my cheek.
Pulling my gaze to yours.
You pulled me in close.
Touching my lips to yours.
I fell asleep before I got to know.
I woke up this morning excited with passion.
Your face etched into my minds eye.
I stopped
Remembered
YOu're just one more thing.
I'm not allowed to touch.
One more thing.
That hurts my heart.

Peccy's photo
Wed 01/09/08 01:14 PM
Welcome back girl! Nice Write!

Mossop's photo
Wed 01/09/08 01:15 PM
very nice lily :smile:

LauraLynn08's photo
Wed 01/09/08 02:34 PM
Wow, Amy that's great, I thought about what you told me the other night too, and thanks, I needed that. Your not to bad yourself.

no photo
Wed 01/09/08 07:49 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

Lily0923's photo
Wed 01/09/08 08:03 PM
thanks darlin' flowerforyou flowerforyou blushing

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 01/09/08 08:14 PM
Yes, that was a very beautiful dreamy poem.