feeling your hands on my sensual curves
enticing and enlighting my every nerve
your breath lightly touching the small of my back
passion and desire, there nothing that lacks
biting and nibbling at the base of my neck
emotions evolve feels like a train wreck
wanting you closer, pressing my body to yours
the heat is burning inside of me, im yours to explore
feeling your hardness against my wet spot
moaning out loud, please baby dont stop
our bodies are moving in rythmic motion
letting go of all our inner emotions
as our bodies are grinding as the pleasure increaces
its just a matter of time before ecstacy releases

Ok, from cutting oneself to sex, hmmm, interesting.

Now thats my kind of bedtime story!!!well done bravo!!

As good as this was and nobody commented...way to go Noel...very imaginative and picturesque.

thanks

the jury is still out on that one

Encore Encore!! can u see the lighters in the air.

Wow Noel !! Very good.

its ok that it doesnt make sense to you, it makes perfect sense to me, and thats what matters right?

It made sense to me, i'm hatless right now.

You are very very good ;-),,, I mean at writing poetry lol

exactly, looks like someone in here has their hater shades on!

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