Topic: Tortured Love
Gryphyn's photo
Sat 11/25/06 02:47 PM
Tortured Love

Torture me now and torture again,
Torture me softly, until at the end.
I feel your heart, as it gets to my soul,
Your love I can find and fill up a hole.

This hole it is empty, from a pain that is past,
Willing to fill it, with love that will last.
It will support you, in thick and in thin,
Two lives together, forever we win.

The torture you see is the feelings within,
Waiting for someone, a life to begin.
You see here a gentle man, who is common at best,
He can Love you more deeply, more deep than the rest.

The rest that he seeks, from this torture and pain,
To feel deep inside him, his love is not vain.
Our feelings may carry us, from other lands.
A love that does hold us, with our own two hands,

The land that we seek, away from the world,
A love that will join us, this love is unfurled.
I give you my word and it is my life,
Hold you my dear, hold you in strife.

Protection not wanted, if it’s denied,
Will save it for later, won’t hurt my pride.
I give unto you, all that I seek
A soul that is weary, also is meek.

To hold this old soul, it’s perfectly clear,
Must be a lady, an old soul who's dear.
I travel the world each passing day,
Searching for her, to Wisk her away.

This is a tale, of a man who is worn,
A tale of a life, a love that is born.
So if you see him, he stands in your way,
Give him a smile, and he’ll carry you away


November 25,2006

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Sat 11/25/06 03:17 PM
Beautiful...

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 11/25/06 03:19 PM
Thank you Poet, Your words are too kind

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sat 11/25/06 04:19 PM
Gryphyn_ What a lovely poem. I really like that one alot.
Great writing!!

escapedlunatic's photo
Sat 11/25/06 04:33 PM
Deep gryph! Deep!

michael1313's photo
Sat 11/25/06 07:32 PM
to just feel her touch,
needed oh so much,
feeling her needs,
like fallen weeds,
or as if on a grassy meadow,
she makes my heart mellow,
dying inside,
killing my pride,
each day I slide,
into my old,and lonely world,
looking for my special girl,
and makes my lonely heart jello,
making this ol' man mellow,
please let me show,
my true love will grow,
and take this lonely fellow,
my hearts on a sleeve,
no not to grieve,
only wishes from this only soul,
wanting kisses from her is my goal,
growing old,getting bold,
feeling love true unfold,
needing now,wonders how,
when will my story be told?..........lonely soul.....M.

okieangel's photo
Sat 11/25/06 08:43 PM
yes it very lovely "G"

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 11/25/06 09:31 PM
Night all and thank you for the kind words.

G

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 11/26/06 11:51 AM
Your a very good at writing never stop.
Beautiful poem!