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Today
Midnight's death stretched far and wide interrupting the horizon with a brilliance unlike anything anyone could ever imagine In this moment of awakening phantom like arms of sunshine stretch outward as if they were seeking to gently kiss each dream a good morning and then watch as they slowly evaporate into possibilities This awe and wonderous moment of life whispers what love doesn't have to say that the world as complicated as the rituals of the indifferent is as beautiful as the bated breath hopes it can be Tomorrow will never be promised so today will always have to be good enough |
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Today Midnight's death stretched far and wide interrupting the horizon with a brilliance unlike anything anyone could ever imagine In this moment of awakening phantom like arms of sunshine stretch outward as if they were seeking to gently kiss each dream a good morning and then watch as they slowly evaporate into possibilities This awe and wonderous moment of life whispers what love doesn't have to say that the world as complicated as the rituals of the indifferent is as beautiful as the bated breath hopes it can be Tomorrow will never be promised so today will always have to be good enough Your last lines you could have done it more better , that's what I felt . Great is the Art of beginning , but greater is the Art of Ending . Anyway , just Okay for me ! |
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Nice poem .
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Today Midnight's death stretched far and wide interrupting the horizon with a brilliance unlike anything anyone could ever imagine In this moment of awakening phantom like arms of sunshine stretch outward as if they were seeking to gently kiss each dream a good morning and then watch as they slowly evaporate into possibilities This awe and wonderous moment of life whispers what love doesn't have to say that the world as complicated as the rituals of the indifferent is as beautiful as the bated breath hopes it can be Tomorrow will never be promised so today will always have to be good enough Your last lines you could have done it more better , that's what I felt . Great is the Art of beginning , but greater is the Art of Ending . Anyway , just Okay for me ! And I agree: Today Midnight’s death stretched far and wide interrupting the horizon with a brilliance unlike anything anyone could ever imagine In this moment of awakening phantom like arms of sunshine stretch outward as if they were seeking to gently kiss each dream a good morning and then watch as they slowly evaporate into possibilities This awe and wonderous moment of life whispers what love doesn’t have to say that the world as complicated as the rituals of the indifferent is as beautiful as the bated breath hopes it can be One by one the unspoken chase of tomorrow fills our moments with time unpromised never realizing that today if treated with fervent passion will always be good enough |
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Nice add on .
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Very impressive!
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