Topic: Ode to my late wife
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Sun 06/09/24 10:29 AM
Dedicated to my late wife and all those who have lost a special partner:

8 months have passed,
I still think of you,
drifting without purpose,
not knowing what to do,

I keep asking myself why did this happen?,
we had so many plans ahead,
now I feel utter loneliness,
and with dreams shattered instead,

moving forward without you,
has been difficult for me,
trying to find a new life,
and all it is meant to be,

part of me longs to move forward,
part of me wants to hold back,
trying for a proper balance,
to be on the right track,

I will forever love you,
but I must move on,
the memories of you will stay with me forever,
until it is my turn and I am gone.

JulieABush's photo
Sun 06/09/24 12:13 PM
Moving poem. Remember in life there are no guarantees like how long each of us will live. I’m sure your late wife would want you to move on.

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Sun 06/09/24 05:55 PM
To JulieABush, thank you for your kind words!

Merry's photo
Mon 06/10/24 02:38 AM
Edited by Merry on Mon 06/10/24 03:07 AM
Beautifully penned. The last line brought a tear to my eye.
Thank you for sharing and wishing you all the best :sunflower::bouquet::hibiscus:

AαƚHҽҽɾα's photo
Mon 06/10/24 05:52 AM
Dedicated to my late wife and all those who have lost a special partner:

8 months have passed,
I still think of you,
drifting without purpose,
not knowing what to do,

I keep asking myself why did this happen?,
we had so many plans ahead,
now I feel utter loneliness,
and with dreams shattered instead,

moving forward without you,
has been difficult for me,
trying to find a new life,
and all it is meant to be,

part of me longs to move forward,
part of me wants to hold back,
trying for a proper balance,
to be on the right track,

I will forever love you,
but I must move on,
the memories of you will stay with me forever,
until it is my turn and I am gone.

Lovely words from your soul :sparkles: could understand the depth of longing and love, your soul could hold for her..

keep writing :cherry_blossom:

Laska Paul 's photo
Tue 06/11/24 08:20 AM
Actually , I wanted to pick out a mistake in your Poem and comment on it . But I 'm sorry I failed to do that . Honestly written !
"Praise" is an Important value of a Good Poetry .
Kuddos to you .

Chukka's photo
Wed 11/20/24 05:30 PM
Lovely words from your soul :sparkles: could understand the depth of longing and love, your soul could hold for her..

keep writing :cherry_blossom:

Slow Dance
This is a poem written by a teenager with cancer.
She wants to see how many
people get her poem.

It is quite a poem, please pass it on.
This poem was written by a terminally ill young girl in a
New York Hospital.
It was sent by a medical doctor Make sure to read what is in the closing statement AFTER THE POEM.

SLOW DANCE
Have you ever watched kids on a merry-go-round?
Or listened to the rain slapping on the ground?
Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?
Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?

You better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last.

Do you run through each day on the fly?
When you ask, “How are you?”
Do you hear the reply?

When the day is done, do you lie in your bed,
with the next hundred chores running through your head?

You'd better slow down
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short
The music won't last.

Ever told your child,
We'll do it tomorrow?
And in your haste,
Not see his sorrow?

Ever lost touch, let a good friendship die
Cause you never had time
To call and say,'Hi'

You'd better slow down.
Don't dance so fast.
Time is short.
The music won't last..

When you run so fast to get somewhere,
You miss half the fun of getting there.

When you worry and hurry through your day,
It is like an unopened gift....
Thrown away.

Life is not a race.
Do take it slower
Hear the music
Before the song is over.


This young girl has 6 months left to live, and as her dying wish, she wanted to send a letter telling everyone to
live their life to the fullest, since she never will.
She'll never make it to prom, graduate from high school,
or get married and have a family of her own.

It's not even your money, just your time! Pls read , make friends n forward ... !! :pray::tulip::two_hearts:Life goes on........