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Existence
Time races at the speed of now when nothing makes more sense than the now where you are the moment the future and the reason for the past trials and tribulations start to make sense as the sun slowly falls into a darkness that only the light of love can keep the completeness of the day from ever coming to fruition Time races at the speed of the absence of everything that is believed to matter a stillness of the world's ado two souls drenched in every second of life as if we are all that exist |
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Quite deep
Kinda sad And it went by so quickly Kinda like a mig25 |
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Existence
Time races at the speed of now when nothing makes more sense than the now where you are the moment the future and the reason for the past trials and tribulations start to make sense as the sun slowly falls into a darkness that only the light of love can keep the completeness of the day from ever coming to fruition Time races at the speed of the absence of everything that is believed to matter a stillness of the world's ado two souls drenched in every second of life as if we are all that exist Existence vs the speed of time - you have explained it so well Mig I can relate it. Your choice of words to depict the meaning is so powerful This is another sword of yours Keep writing |
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Nice poem .
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Very Nice
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