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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt,
contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. |
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Nice poem .
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Intense.
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Might want to try a Tylenol
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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Intense. Thanks, Storm. |
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt,
contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. NICE ONE |
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt,
contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. NICE ONE Thanks, Robin. |
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt, contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. Your poetry is art. You remind me of ladywind and Poppashroom. Thank you for inspiring me to write!!! |
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt, contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. Your poetry is art. You remind me of ladywind and Poppashroom. Thank you for inspiring me to write!!! |
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Your poetry is art. You remind me of ladywind and Poppashroom. Thank you for inspiring me to write!!! That's a generous compliment, thanks mig. |
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