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New here, would you please rate my profile.
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Edited by
Mortman
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Sat 04/06/24 06:46 PM
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It's a good profile. Interesting photo and you filled in all the info. The text blurb describes you, but nothing seems to grab attention.
The photo is interesting because it's black & white and high contrast. Filtered? It bugs me that you're not smiling or looking into the camera, but since you're 6' tall, I guess looking up to you is the view the ladies will have to get used to, right? And the monochrome filter is odd, too. For better results, maybe get more photos, with one or more where you're looking into the camera when taking the shot. Smiling would make you more approachable. Maybe get a shot or two of yourself in an interesting place. A beach or an event sounds good! The text blurb describes a busy, lonely life, and while that may be true, you could fix it a bit. Maybe aim for a "I want to go out you could come along" sentiment. I think emphasize the fun and also maybe add something to describe what kind of woman you seek. Do you have a "type?" That would be good to know. If not, and you're really open to anything, then it's probably fine, as is. The headline you chose is weird, too. "Hello, how's your day been?" is a salutation. Better could be "Hi, let's go catch a show!" or something like that? Have fun with it. Anyway, it's still a good profile as is. You seem like a good-looking guy and the ladies will probably understand what you mean anyway. But for the profile that is good but could be better, I rate it 7/10. Good luck! |
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