Topic: Music
mig25's photo
Fri 03/08/24 06:42 PM
Music

The open window
invited
the sound of rain
to dance
with the candlelight's shimmer
soothingly filling
the night's quiet
with a different kind of noise

Beautiful
notes
relentlessly torturing
my pain
with a meditative art
that sways
to a rhythm
that reaches deep into my soul
as it were searching
for the beginning
of letting go

Soon
the rain eases
as the open window
invites
a gentle breeze
to quiet the candle's light
and darkness
becomes the most amazing color
of dreams

I am
at peace
with having known yesterday
because
the music has left
an indelible now
that offers
my tomorrow
a different kind of noise


Vibes's photo
Fri 03/08/24 11:55 PM
Music
Sounds more rhythmic -making
Rounds around the soul
Hope of the morrow -as
Rope of faith .
Dreams are dark?-nice
Words at park.
Good script :ok_hand:

JulieABush's photo
Sat 03/09/24 03:16 AM
Nice write:thumbsup: :wink: .

AαƚHҽҽɾα's photo
Thu 03/14/24 12:38 PM
Music

The open window
invited
the sound of rain
to dance
with the candlelight's shimmer
soothingly filling
the night's quiet
with a different kind of noise

Beautiful
notes
relentlessly torturing
my pain
with a meditative art
that sways
to a rhythm
that reaches deep into my soul
as it were searching
for the beginning
of letting go

Soon
the rain eases
as the open window
invites
a gentle breeze
to quiet the candle's light
and darkness
becomes the most amazing color
of dreams

I am
at peace
with having known yesterday
because
the music has left
an indelible now
that offers
my tomorrow
a different kind of noise

A rhythm of the feeling that's adorably portrayed is felt deep within the soul while reading 🌧

Such an immense moment to experience the peace amidst the rain, candlelight and the breeze but it's the human brain that can enjoy the present and also awaits tomorrow's noise :slight_smile: