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The Crystal Heart Let me tell you of a tale From a long time ago, The tale of the crystal heart That formed in the new fallen snow. It formed over night Where two lovers met, On their last day of love No will ever forget. They kept their love a secret From those that kept them apart, Their love knew no bounds It was deep within their heart. They would sneak away at times To their secret hide-a-away, Where they felt their love As it grew every day. No one knew of their meetings Or even suspected such, They kept it to themselves The love they felt so much. Now the tale must be told About the crystal heart, Of the love between these two That could never drift apart. They met for the last time On a cold wintry night, A blizzard of a storm It was a chilling sight. They huddled close together So they could stay warm, It was chilling to the bone They couldn't keep from harm. They embraced each other With one last shivering kiss, They froze together in time In that one moment of bliss. The storm was letting up As the snow gently falls down, When the townspeople were searching Looking all around. They came upon the two lovers Statues frozen in ice, No one knew of their love Or their sacrifice. But looks of awe befell Upon the parents' face, When they saw what had formed And slowly took place. A crystal heart had formed Where the two had embraced, Sealing their love forever Where their fate had been graced. |
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Edited by
songstress1
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Tue 01/01/08 07:13 PM
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The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever read
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Very nice!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Awww you know how to make a guy blush...that's what I was writing in the car this afternoon. I'm glad you liked it. Now where's your whip? |
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That was really good.
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Edited by
Wolfeyes58
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Tue 01/01/08 07:40 PM
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The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever read ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life. |
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MsTeddybear-Thanks Susan glad you liked it..
Tobias-glad you liked it too as well. |
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The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever read ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life. Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother ![]() I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poem ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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That was so excellent I almost felt not worthy to read it. Excellent write Wolfeyes.
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The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever read ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life. Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother ![]() I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poem ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Edited by
Noden
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Tue 01/01/08 08:10 PM
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The most loving, sweetest sacrifice of all that I've ever read ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Did you really like it? It all came together this afternoon while smoking away my last cigs for life. Thank you, so very much for what you just did, my brother ![]() I loved the poem so much, I wish someone would write like that for me someday, I would cherish him with all my heart, and make love for months on end, and blow his ................mind with everything I've got bottled up inside me, that's how much I loved this poem ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() for sure woman, my god I bet there is many woman whom are lusting after your man right now, not many guys now how to move a woman, but he does!!!! he's got what it takes, and I don't need to tell you that it's "him", that has to know this.... |
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way 2 go bro, thats from the jokerster Cooly
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way 2 go bro, thats from the jokerster Cooly ![]() Thanks Cooly...Only drink coffee here...ask KC.. |
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Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW
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Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Why thank you Kristi...that warms my heart the way you feel about it...I've been thinking about the story as well that will follow it. |
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Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Okay I'm blown away I must say this is my favorite so far that was totaly awesome what a movie this one would surely make WOW ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, I don't ever get tired of hearing it...I just can't believe what I am putting out there and people like it. You are my muse and I love you. |
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You are the ultimate story teller Wolf...great job.
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