Topic: Errrrrrrotic Dance
lookhere46's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:06 PM
Ok let start this new years of just right.
I wanna dance with so put something on tight.
I am gonna twirl you around tonight on the floor.
And hold you so close because I know you want more.
The closeness of our bodies just feeling you shake.
My we are good together like ice cream and cake.
When we dance together you give me such chills.
I kiss your sweet neck and give you some thrills.
The scent of your body your smile and your grace.
I Pull you in close and kiss your sweet face.
Tonight we are one just joined at the hips.
Its the passion I feel when I kiss your swet lips.


lookhere46's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:08 PM
oops missed the "e" in lips

AaronZ's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:10 PM

oops missed the "e" in lips


thats ok

say, what do you think of this


lookhere46's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:19 PM
is that a poem?

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:19 PM

Ok let start this new years of just right.
I wanna dance with so put something on tight.
I am gonna twirl you around tonight on the floor.
And hold you so close because I know you want more.
The closeness of our bodies just feeling you shake.
My we are good together like ice cream and cake.
When we dance together you give me such chills.
I kiss your sweet neck and give you some thrills.
The scent of your body your smile and your grace.
I Pull you in close and kiss your sweet face.
Tonight we are one just joined at the hips.
Its the passion I feel when I kiss your swet lips.




Nice poem! bigsmile

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:23 PM
Don't hold back, tell us how ya really feel Aaron......

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:24 PM
look, and look again the "e" in lips? Can I put it in sweet instead? :tongue:

AnnG1959's photo
Tue 01/01/08 04:25 PM
This is a great poem happy and I thank you so much for sharing.

Ann flowerforyou