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Topic: Dreaming
Jasmine Joined Sat 04/23/22 Posts: 6	Mon 04/25/22 02:31 PM Edited by Jasmine on Mon 04/25/22 02:35 PM
I saw not seven, But thousand colours, Of rainbow in the sky, Each beautiful and alive, As if ready to fly.. I am asleep and dreaming, Yet I feel sunshine, Caressing the skin, Howz that possible, When I know I am in a dream.. I visit a place faraway, Where happiness seems to be, In the air each day, I see you stretching your hand, Waiting for me to come your way.. It's a dream and I know, I am awake in my dream, Should I open my eyes and, Come back to reality, Or stay in my dream, Where happiness is what, Everyone feels..

cleve Joined Fri 11/06/20 Posts: 813	Mon 04/25/22 05:59 PM
I saw not seven, But thousand colours, Of rainbow in the sky, Each beautiful and alive, As if ready to fly.. I am asleep and dreaming, Yet I feel sunshine, Caressing the skin, Howz that possible, When I know I am in a dream.. I visit a place faraway, Where happiness seems to be, In the air each day, I see you stretching your hand, Waiting for me to come your way.. It's a dream and I know, I am awake in my dream, Should I open my eyes and, Come back to reality, Or stay in my dream, Where happiness is what, Everyone feels.. I LIKE IT..... HAPPINESS IS A PERSONAL CHOICE WE ALL MAKE................

Two Joined Thu 06/02/16 Posts: 13917	Mon 04/25/22 07:32 PM
Very nice

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Tue 04/26/22 12:02 AM
NICE

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3519	Tue 04/26/22 03:01 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Tue 06/11/19 Posts: 465	Tue 04/26/22 06:42 AM
Lovely poem.

Jasmine Joined Sat 04/23/22 Posts: 6	Tue 04/26/22 02:10 PM
Thank you everyone :-)

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22879	Tue 04/26/22 10:32 PM
Your poems are almost so much similar to that of Aatheera poems , Good Rhyming , Sweet words , Happy Ending , I really dont know How to praise , Who is better than Who ?? If I say Your poems are Nice then She will be Angry on me and If i say She is better than yours , You will get frustrated , So I will just say Both are equally Good and Nice in writing Poems . Rest Readers choice.

Jasmine Joined Sat 04/23/22 Posts: 6	Wed 04/27/22 12:06 AM
Your poems are almost so much similar to that of Aatheera poems , Good Rhyming , Sweet words , Happy Ending , I really dont know How to praise , Who is better than Who ?? If I say Your poems are Nice then She will be Angry on me and If i say She is better than yours , You will get frustrated , So I will just say Both are equally Good and Nice in writing Poems . Rest Readers choice. There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-)

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Wed 04/27/22 12:37 AM
There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-) Hello Jasmine your unique way of expressing can't be compared with any one. I always spend time reading your poems n they are my all time favourites ❤ Keep writing them, have a good day

Jasmine Joined Sat 04/23/22 Posts: 6	Wed 04/27/22 01:30 PM
There are many writers on this forum who are way better than me. I have said this many times. And Aatheera is a better writer than me :-) Hello Jasmine your unique way of expressing can't be compared with any one. I always spend time reading your poems n they are my all time favourites ❤ Keep writing them, have a good day Thank you :-)

artRabbit Joined Fri 04/15/22 Posts: 1614	Wed 04/27/22 02:52 PM
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Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 54573	Wed 04/27/22 07:26 PM
Nice imagination When the mind is free Words flow at a spree Within there is joy Wants everyone to enjoy Wonderful in expression Wishes to continue mission.

ayoub Joined Mon 05/23/22 Posts: 1	Mon 05/23/22 02:09 PM
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