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I’m so tired of this empty feeling.
I’m so tired of being alone. I lay here staring at the ceiling, Waiting by the phone. I wish and I dream That we’ll be together soon. I can’t wait until we can look up hand in hand At the stars and at the moon. I try not to weep. I hope he doesn’t hear my cries, But I can’t stop the tears Falling from my eyes. Every day Every hour Every moment I’m thinking of you through the miles and loving you. |
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Lovely poem
Live rhythm Lonely feels Loudly fills |
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Thank you Vibes
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NICE
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Nice poem .
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I’m so tired of this empty feeling. I’m so tired of being alone. I lay here staring at the ceiling, Waiting by the phone. I wish and I dream That we’ll be together soon. I can’t wait until we can look up hand in hand At the stars and at the moon. I try not to weep. I hope he doesn’t hear my cries, But I can’t stop the tears Falling from my eyes. Every day Every hour Every moment I’m thinking of you through the miles and loving you. Nice!! |
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I’m so tired of this empty feeling. I’m so tired of being alone. I lay here staring at the ceiling, Waiting by the phone. I wish and I dream That we’ll be together soon. I can’t wait until we can look up hand in hand At the stars and at the moon. I try not to weep. I hope he doesn’t hear my cries, But I can’t stop the tears Falling from my eyes. Every day Every hour Every moment I’m thinking of you through the miles and loving you. My Friend you write such a beautiful Poem every word is just tailor made . But then what Happened to you? A small Mistake can really spoil the whole mood of Reading .I don't know how many of you have read this poem . [I try not to weep I hope he doesn't hear my cries But I can't stop the tears Falling from my Eyes ] Is this a Typographical Mistake or you have created it just for a Twist . A small bit of Advice .Next time when you write a Poem draft it first before posting. Anyway , I will say Its Okay . 7/10 on scale just to encourage you ., |
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Thanks to everyone...
Special mention to Laska paul... Thanks for your kind gesture shown. Actually it's written for my very close friend who is no more right now due to some personal issues. I Miss him (not her ) too much. For your kind note - all the poems not for female or for Girls. Thank you - keep sharing keep posting keep encouraging each other. Well defined platform for sharing some personal thoughts in a shape of poem. Thank you and God bless you |
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Your comments is Appreciated . In such a case you should have written a Clean Title or Subject for this Poem to have a better impact to avoid confusion . |
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Agreed and will be corrected in the future posts.
Thank you Bro. Paul |
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