Topic: An Abstract Evening
mig25's photo
Thu 02/24/22 08:42 PM
An Abstract Evening

Quietly
the unfinished story
unfolds
as the winds of time
slowly
yet
rhythmically
paint the sky
abstract hues
fused together by a coherent beauty
of peaceful serenity

Silence
engulfs the world
with noises that only the soul
can feel
as the stars
welcomes the night
with shimmering shadows
that paint the abstract hues
with dreams
as colorful as the imagination

The ocean waves
goodbye
as winds
rest
and tonight
the story finally has its perfect ending


Merry's photo
Thu 02/24/22 08:57 PM
:bouquet: Beautiful words :bouquet:

no photo
Thu 02/24/22 10:34 PM
N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:C:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:

Emotionally a good ending.
Some Tragediennes has bas ending.
An Finally few are given to taken as ending. :pray:

JulieABush's photo
Fri 02/25/22 12:47 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Vibes's photo
Fri 02/25/22 02:15 AM
What an imagination

Winds -painting
Dreams- full of colours
Ocean-waves

Rhythm is their
Really very fair
Engulfing darkness
Emotionally depicted
Brilliantly scribed
Beautifully arranged.