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Lonely were my days!
Silence was on my face! Did I miss you Or control that tear? My emotions for you stood very far without a fear! Did I smile or blush? I did not even feel anything as such! Did I struggle with a pain or a worry? I didnt talk or share with any! Sometimes and somedays, We are forced to experience these faded days! When love and routine gets disturbed by unusual things, When we had to cope up and still fly with our wings! It's hard to express or accept so soon, When emotions remain unaddressed without a interesting tune! Life is all about passing those narrow caves, As we are expected to adjust the darkness and live our days! Faded emotions doesn't easily glitter, Love has to bring back those moments of togetherness to heal the incomplete heart that's prone to wither! Until then let's follow the usual way, As responsibilities pushes us to run our day! -Aatheera |
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Nice poem
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Faded Emotions or Motion Of Fades.....  You were Dealing with all these, It was Healing Me all Time. You went off thoughts of missing Me, I was going through Blessings of way in Prayers from You. Both were unable to connect, But Both were going on flow, Same as the Clock Time. Seconds of pulses like Heart Beat.  For a moment of apart, Has brought such moments, Didn't You remember or Didn't I rewinded... The Flash Back Of Our Being Apart, Which was supposed to be an End, But It was the beginning of new Life. Lighting Of New Emotions. You in Me & I in You Love You was the closeness chapter... Still Bonded...  only for YOU ........Robin |
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Emotions Faded Emotions or Motion Of Fades..... You were Dealing with all these, It was Healing Me all Time. You went off thoughts of missing Me, I was going through Blessings of way in Prayers from You. Both were unable to connect, But Both were going on flow, Same as the Clock Time. Seconds of pulses like Heart Beat. For a moment of apart, Has brought such moments, Didn't You remember or Didn't I rewinded... The Flash Back Of Our Being Apart, Which was supposed to be an End, But It was the beginning of new Life. Lighting Of New Emotions. You in Me & I in You Love You was the closeness chapter... Still Bonded... only for YOU ........Robin finally, faded emotions n colorful emotions had a climax as expected ❤ |
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Nice poem .Thankyou Julie
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Nice poem Robin
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Another good poem from Aatheera Situation explained Satire is combined Life always move on Living as it goes on We are to stand on Wishing to be well on |
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Another good poem from Aatheera
Situation explained Satire is combined Life always move on Living as it goes on We are to stand on Wishing to be well on Thank you
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Lonely were my days! Silence was on my face! Did I miss you Or control that tear? My emotions for you stood very far without a fear! Did I smile or blush? I did not even feel anything as such! Did I struggle with a pain or a worry? I didnt talk or share with any! Sometimes and somedays, We are forced to experience these faded days! When love and routine gets disturbed by unusual things, When we had to cope up and still fly with our wings! It's hard to express or accept so soon, When emotions remain unaddressed without a interesting tune! Life is all about passing those narrow caves, As we are expected to adjust the darkness and live our days! Faded emotions doesn't easily glitter, Love has to bring back those moments of togetherness to heal the incomplete heart that's prone to wither! Until then let's follow the usual way, As responsibilities pushes us to run our day! -Aatheera Faded emotions - Thanks Aatheera for the cute poem. God bless you |
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Faded emotions - Thanks Aatheera for the cute poem. God bless you Thankyou Philip, Stay blessed and have good times
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Faded emotions - Thanks Aatheera for the cute poem. God bless you
Thankyou Philip, Stay blessed and have good times
You're welcome - Encouraging you to write more and more. Stay blessed. |
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Some good words to appreciate someone's writing . 1. You are great at conveying things literally. 2. You are a great story teller . 3. You are a good Story weaver 4. You are strong in drafting your poems 5. You are superior in your thought process. As a reader I enjoying reading your poems but the whole thing is that you always have a sad ending . You can even twist your poem to make a Happy Ending just like a Movie . Readers mostly love Happy Ending ! That's only my Point of View . Actually, I am no one to Judge your Poems . But .... Keep Your work going on. |
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Some good words to appreciate someone's writing .
1. You are great at conveying things literally. 2. You are a great story teller . 3. You are a good Story weaver 4. You are strong in drafting your poems 5. You are superior in your thought process. As a reader I enjoying reading your poems but the whole thing is that you always have a sad ending . You can even twist your poem to make a Happy Ending just like a Movie . Readers mostly love Happy Ending ! That's only my Point of View . Actually, I am no one to Judge your Poems . But .... Keep Your work going on. thankyou for appreciating, when some emotions excite or hit me, I record them as a poem or a learning.. We all know the happy ending of it but if I present the view on how I sustained or handled, it might be consoling to those who are facing it alone or it might provoke new solutions for them.. That's the intention n honestly I can't change n present a different ending.. Whatever emotions i truly went through will be expressed in all my versions, thanks for reading them |
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Lonely were my days! Silence was on my face! Did I miss you Or control that tear? My emotions for you stood very far without a fear! Did I smile or blush? I did not even feel anything as such! Did I struggle with a pain or a worry? I didnt talk or share with any! Sometimes and somedays, We are forced to experience these faded days! When love and routine gets disturbed by unusual things, When we had to cope up and still fly with our wings! It's hard to express or accept so soon, When emotions remain unaddressed without a interesting tune! Life is all about passing those narrow caves, As we are expected to adjust the darkness and live our days! Faded emotions doesn't easily glitter, Love has to bring back those moments of togetherness to heal the incomplete heart that's prone to wither! Until then let's follow the usual way, As responsibilities pushes us to run our day! -Aatheera Lovely one Aatheera. u inspire me |
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Lovely one Aatheera. u inspire me thankyou Arvind, All the best, keep writing your quotes n poems too..stay blessed
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