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Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 11/03/21 01:00 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3698	Wed 11/03/21 03:25 AM
Nice .

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 11/03/21 08:34 PM
thank you Julie for your appreciation.

Unknow Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 101536	Wed 09/14/22 07:26 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. Very expressive and nice poem. You should write more of them.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 09/14/22 09:00 AM
Thank you Riverspirit,

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 55512	Thu 09/15/22 12:29 AM
Wow! Nice to read A new poet on the rise! Life is moving Lines are daring Lot of impression Lovely narration

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 01:10 AM
Thanks Vibes, I wrote this last November and had forgotten all about it until Riverspirit dug it out of the archives.

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Thu 09/15/22 02:07 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. NICE wahhhh

Unknow Joined Thu 01/06/22 Posts: 129	Thu 09/15/22 02:22 AM
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Unknow Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 101536	Thu 09/15/22 02:27 AM
Thanks Vibes, I wrote this last November and had forgotten all about it until Riverspirit dug it out of the archives. You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 02:31 AM
Thanks Robin and Hametino.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 02:33 AM
You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then. Well you got me back, you're making me blush this time.

Unknow Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 101536	Thu 09/15/22 02:48 AM
You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then. Well you got me back, you're making me blush this time.

Unknow Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 4727	Fri 09/16/22 02:23 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. @Mike, it's really an adorable piece of work I loved the wisdom behind the depth of reality that's portrayed with elegance

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Fri 09/16/22 02:34 AM
Thank you Aatheera, it was a way to release anguish of a joyful loss. The joy is back now.

Unknow Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 4727	Fri 09/16/22 02:37 AM
Thank you Aatheera, it was a way to release anguish of a joyful loss. The joy is back now. Happy for you

Unknow Joined Thu 06/25/20 Posts: 6	Fri 09/16/22 06:18 AM
atheera I think u r confused

Unknow Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 4727	Sun 09/18/22 07:52 AM
Happy for you @Mike I had considered the second line of yours and related it with your expressive and inspiring participation in forum threads for the past few days and that made me wish my happiness for you never felt anything else, I'm sorry if I was wrong.. Please continue spreading the happiness to all of us, we definitely need inspiring people like you to make the forums lively @Roni - wondering, I didn't knew you anyways thanks for letting me know.