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McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Thu 10/07/21 09:07 AM
It sits and it rots, in the gut Doesn't stop, In a rut Better not, fill the cup Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, grab the keys Try to walk, and you wheeze Give a cough, and you bleed Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3504	Thu 10/07/21 02:24 PM
Nice poem .

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Thu 10/07/21 02:28 PM
thanks!!

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Fri 10/08/21 02:38 AM
Needs to be heard than read.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Fri 10/08/21 03:46 AM
I run crazy to look for the rhyming words in each poem n this one made me admire it as I loved reading it on n on enjoyed and Nice

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Sat 10/09/21 07:24 PM
finished product It sits and it rots, in the gut Doesn't stop, In a rut Better not, fill the cup Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, grab the keys Try to walk, and you wheeze Give a cough, and you bleed Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, and you cry Time it stops, time it flies Paradox, I'm alive Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, I'm picked up Seeing spots, stomach pumped In a cot, had enough Talk to God, lift me up Talk to God, lift me up Talk to God, lift me up

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/10/21 12:08 AM
finished product It sits and it rots, in the gut Doesn't stop, In a rut Better not, fill the cup Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, throw it up Take a shot, grab the keys Try to walk, and you wheeze Give a cough, and you bleed Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, hit your knees Then you drop, and you cry Time it stops, time it flies Paradox, I'm alive Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, almost died Call the cops, I'm picked up Seeing spots, stomach pumped In a cot, had enough Talk to God, lift me up Talk to God, lift me up Talk to God, lift me up Im enjoying reading each line as it progresses

Gillermo Joined Mon 08/09/21 Posts: 1	Sun 10/10/21 12:18 AM
Is that a poem?

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Sun 10/10/21 01:26 AM
Is that a poem? yes indeed

McSeanMD Joined Thu 09/30/21 Posts: 110	Sun 10/10/21 01:27 AM
Im enjoying reading each line as it progresses thank you!

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