Topic: I'll write you a poem | |
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choose the topic, tone, nuance... I just want to write
give me inspiration. if you don't want anyone to know it's about you, message me |
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first one done, guess who it's about
Existential thoughts bumble around my head wreathed in fire A plug in a wall Cinn agus nialais A elaborate labyrinth of circuit boards we call reality Atlas no longer bearing the weight of the sky Crushing space and time inside my mind Torn between being a witness and not having the strength The world operates on a set course Oblivious to the suffering of man Of a woman Of me A girl lost But still searching to find a way out |
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Are your poems about people in the world, history or people on Mingle?
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people here on mingle
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Are your poems about people in the world, history or people on Mingle? I want more great network to be set to the world |
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I vote for a poem about the agony of long distance relationships.
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I vote for a poem about the agony of long distance relationships. message me some extra details and I'll get to it |
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I vote for a poem about the agony of long distance relationships. I was about to make the same request... |
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Bonnie and Mark I married a Mingler. I am from New Zealand, he was from England. I feel for you. Meet asap, that is my advice.
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first one done, guess who it's about Existential thoughts bumble around my head wreathed in fire A plug in a wall Cinn agus nialais A elaborate labyrinth of circuit boards we call reality Atlas no longer bearing the weight of the sky Crushing space and time inside my mind Torn between being a witness and not having the strength The world operates on a set course Oblivious to the suffering of man Of a woman Of me A girl lost But still searching to find a way out No idea? |
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yeah my imagery might not have been super strong, I wrote it in 15 minutes
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Bonnie and Mark I married a Mingler. I am from New Zealand, he was from England. I feel for you. Meet asap, that is my advice. We've been hashing details feverishly, thank you for the advice! |
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Bonnie and Mark I married a Mingler. I am from New Zealand, he was from England. I feel for you. Meet asap, that is my advice. I didn't realize you married a Mingler! So you definitely know what it's like to do long distance! We have plans to meet before the end of the year. |
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first one done, guess who it's about Existential thoughts bumble around my head wreathed in fire A plug in a wall Cinn agus nialais A elaborate labyrinth of circuit boards we call reality Atlas no longer bearing the weight of the sky Crushing space and time inside my mind Torn between being a witness and not having the strength The world operates on a set course Oblivious to the suffering of man Of a woman Of me A girl lost But still searching to find a way out No idea? It was me. |
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thanks again for being a guinea pig!
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Sun 10/10/21 03:37 PM
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first one done, guess who it's about Existential thoughts bumble around my head wreathed in fire A plug in a wall Cinn agus nialais A elaborate labyrinth of circuit boards we call reality Atlas no longer bearing the weight of the sky Crushing space and time inside my mind Torn between being a witness and not having the strength The world operates on a set course Oblivious to the suffering of man Of a woman Of me A girl lost But still searching to find a way out No idea? It was me. Lol, I had no clue ❤ |
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