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Topic: a blessing or a pain?
Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 09/29/21 03:13 AM
My soul was tired, Your care was required! My body was unwell, I felt not to tell! Not expecting care, No one beside to share! Struggling to bear, But there wasn't a tear! Wished if you will care, But expecting would be unfair! Closed my eyes with a trouble, Realizing that I'm just a rubble! Suddenly realised you were beside, As I opened my eyes wide! You asked if I'm fine, That moment was divine! You were there to care, As you said not to worry but share! My soul was in peace, But doesn't wish to cease! God blessed me with a dream, Which will never happen even if my fortune is extreme! -Aatheera

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3493	Wed 09/29/21 03:18 AM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 09/29/21 03:42 AM
Nice poem . Thanks dear ☺

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 09/29/21 04:27 AM
NICE DREAM

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 09/29/21 04:32 AM
A blessing when i was in dreams with lots of beautiful angels around.. Painful was when my friends kicked me all around as i woke up having them shocked face around...

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 09/29/21 05:01 AM
A blessing when i was in dreams with lots of beautiful angels around.. Painful was when my friends kicked me all around as i woke up having them shocked face around... looks like blessing happens often guess friends would hv taken this chance to kick you as much as they can enjoy

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22879	Wed 09/29/21 05:53 AM
gd.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 09/29/21 06:49 AM
gd. Thankyou

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Wed 09/29/21 07:09 AM
NICE

Unknow Joined Wed 09/22/21 Posts: 2	Fri 10/01/21 02:46 AM
nice.. !!! care is a always a great medicine for many pains.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Fri 10/01/21 03:24 AM
nice.. !!! care is a always a great medicine for many pains. rightly said

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Fri 10/01/21 07:50 AM
Without Pain, No Gain.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Fri 10/01/21 09:30 AM
Without Pain, No Gain. true

Loni Joined Mon 09/20/21 Posts: 1	Sun 10/03/21 09:05 PM
Very Beautiful. Thank U for sharing.

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Sun 10/03/21 09:06 PM
Very Beautiful. Thank U for sharing. Thank you ☺ take care..

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54502	Tue 12/07/21 01:05 AM

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