Topic: Start again
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Tue 01/12/21 08:56 PM
I was so lost in my jealousy,
Anger and pain,
I didn't see the effort you were making,
To get us back together again,
Now you are gone,
And I feel so alone,
We were meant for each other,
We were so compatible,
Now I am more forgiving and,
More acceptable,
But is it too late,
Will you return,
I will be waiting here,
Come back if you can,
I know there will be difficulties,
But I will wait for you each day,
There's no one like you,
So we will find a way,
This silence, This distance,
Is driving me insane,
How about we solve our issues,
And start this relationship again?

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Wed 01/13/21 01:00 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Wed 01/13/21 01:32 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thanks smile2

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Wed 01/13/21 10:15 AM
Wonderful Poem , Lots of Mixture of Words and you put in such an Order that any People Who is Having Heart Cancer will be healed Quickly . Once Again , Fantabulous Poem ( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit )

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Wed 01/13/21 02:14 PM

( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit )


Not all poetry has rhyming in it.

OT: Nice poem Jasmine!

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Wed 01/13/21 08:14 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Wed 01/13/21 08:20 PM

Wonderful Poem , Lots of Mixture of Words and you put in such an Order that any People Who is Having Heart Cancer will be healed Quickly . Once Again , Fantabulous Poem ( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit )


Thank you and maybe could have smile2

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Wed 01/13/21 08:15 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Wed 01/13/21 08:17 PM


( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit )


Not all poetry has rhyming in it.

OT: Nice poem Jasmine!


That's true about rhyming and thank you smile2