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I was so lost in my jealousy,
Anger and pain, I didn't see the effort you were making, To get us back together again, Now you are gone, And I feel so alone, We were meant for each other, We were so compatible, Now I am more forgiving and, More acceptable, But is it too late, Will you return, I will be waiting here, Come back if you can, I know there will be difficulties, But I will wait for you each day, There's no one like you, So we will find a way, This silence, This distance, Is driving me insane, How about we solve our issues, And start this relationship again? |
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Nice poem .
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Nice poem . Thanks |
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Wonderful Poem , Lots of Mixture of Words and you put in such an Order that any People Who is Having Heart Cancer will be healed Quickly . Once Again , Fantabulous Poem ( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit )
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( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit ) Not all poetry has rhyming in it. OT: Nice poem Jasmine! |
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Edited by
Jasmine
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Wed 01/13/21 08:20 PM
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Wonderful Poem , Lots of Mixture of Words and you put in such an Order that any People Who is Having Heart Cancer will be healed Quickly . Once Again , Fantabulous Poem ( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit ) Thank you and maybe could have |
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Edited by
Jasmine
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Wed 01/13/21 08:17 PM
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( Note: Could have improved the rhyming a little bit ) Not all poetry has rhyming in it. OT: Nice poem Jasmine! That's true about rhyming and thank you |
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