Topic: Stolen solitude
Shelley's photo
Tue 06/02/20 10:09 AM
My silent response does not admit defeat
My silent response only concedes to the successions in life
Concedes to the enveloping silence
Where solitude wraps around me tightly
Loneliness holds my hand
My thoughts are silenced by hardship, wearied
Yet tears still stream, uninvited
My fists clench, anger rises at these unwelcome guests
My silent response does not admit defeat
My silent response only concedes to the successions in life

JulieABush's photo
Wed 06/03/20 04:09 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

jaish's photo
Wed 06/03/20 04:39 AM


My silent response does not admit defeat
My silent response only concedes to the successions in life


:thumbsup:
Lines that shed light. nice!

no photo
Wed 06/03/20 04:48 AM
Very nice

Rock's photo
Thu 06/04/20 03:46 AM
Well done. :thumbsup:

Shelley's photo
Thu 06/04/20 07:32 AM
Well done. :thumbsup:

Thanks! I'll take that as high praise. I was expecting you to say something contrary.

Rock's photo
Thu 06/04/20 08:03 AM

Well done. :thumbsup:

Thanks! I'll take that as high praise. I was expecting you to say something contrary.


It was meant as high praise.

Katja's photo
Tue 06/16/20 12:49 AM
:thumbsup:

mysticalview21's photo
Sat 06/20/20 04:37 AM
agree :thumbsup: nice write...