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My silent response does not admit defeat
My silent response only concedes to the successions in life Concedes to the enveloping silence Where solitude wraps around me tightly Loneliness holds my hand My thoughts are silenced by hardship, wearied Yet tears still stream, uninvited My fists clench, anger rises at these unwelcome guests My silent response does not admit defeat My silent response only concedes to the successions in life |
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Nice poem .
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My silent response does not admit defeat My silent response only concedes to the successions in life Lines that shed light. nice! |
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Very nice
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Well done.
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Well done. Thanks! I'll take that as high praise. I was expecting you to say something contrary. |
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Well done.
Thanks! I'll take that as high praise. I was expecting you to say something contrary. It was meant as high praise. |
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agree nice write...
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