Topic: Worth It
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Mon 11/20/06 08:25 AM
All was not right in my world
I was alone
Throwing myself into work
Just to cover the darkness that I had become

Then suddenly there you were
The light shone through
Warmth spread through out my world
I smiled more
I laughed more

The darkness subsided
Nothing but light surrounds me now
All is right in my world....

I can see the sun
I can hear the birds
I can see you
All is right with my world
The darkness subsided


Chuckee's photo
Mon 11/20/06 08:28 AM
Awsome and hit it right on the head!!!!

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Mon 11/20/06 08:29 AM
Good..glad ya like it :)

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/20/06 08:35 AM
AWESOME GIRL DAMN YOU AMAZE ME MORE AND MORE!!

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Mon 11/20/06 08:39 AM
<grinz> Thanks Gurly

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Mon 11/20/06 08:51 AM
Very nice. May this remain true for you.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 11/20/06 09:34 AM
Today I took a trip
I went above and beyond
i looked into your soul
and let you peek into mine
all the hurt went away
and I saw
what you wanted from me
You lit up my world
You took away the pain
You saw me for me
and brought truth to the pain
I am healed
and know what I must do
I am a better person
because
I have loved YOU...

Chuckee's photo
Mon 11/20/06 11:01 AM
That was deep!!! Amazing

Chuckee's photo
Mon 11/20/06 11:24 AM
You two are very talented, I loved 'em both!!!!!!

michael1313's photo
Mon 11/20/06 02:42 PM
today we have found,
some words so profound,
as lonely hearts were left a'ground,

we see into th' soul,
our happieness th goal,
looking for love not torn,
hopes to live like newborn,
every sight,
every flight,
even sights of forelorn,
we love for our life,
for husband or wife,
in a new friend to grow,
hoping someday to know,
coming around,
floating around,
standing your ground,
matters not,
what you got,
as long as it's LOVE True,
that you have found..........M.

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Mon 11/20/06 02:48 PM
Michael that was beautiful

michael1313's photo
Mon 11/20/06 10:24 PM
thank You...
comming from you...this is a real compliment!
as you are a really good poet!!!