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What stands out to me most is that your description rambles. Edit. Maybe organize your thoughts and rewrite. Also, separated is unclear and scary. If you recently broke up from a long term non-marital relationship, that is far different than separated from married partner but not yet divorced. Address that. I don't think you need multiple sentences to state you are an animal lover. Include some descriptive terms identifying the type of woman you're seeking (quiet, cheerful, affectionate, independent, loyal, fit, likes xyz etc.).
Nothing wrong with editing your profile multiple times until you have included what you think is most important, while remaining honest.

Hi make a few paragraphs it is hard on the eyes , add some more pics ,