Topic: ~After You Held my Hand~
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Thu 12/20/07 04:28 AM

You reached across the space between us
Held my hand, for what seemed an eternity
Everything that confused and befuddled me
Now made sense and seemed logical
And when we parted it seemed so strange
The world so empty cold and gray
You, the man, not a foolish adrenaline thug
A man,firm yet yielding to the touch
Calming yet wild enough to make me blush
And I knew when I looked into your eyes
That I wouldn't have to ask a second time
That my wish would become your desire
And my desire would become your wish
Time would stop, and the world would cease to exist
It would only be you and I, in this moments breath in time
And I knew then at that moment that this one
Is a 1 chance in a lifetime,not a once in awhile


*** I was inspired after reading brwnkimba's piece "After We Held Hand's" and the words took form during the day yesterday, so I wrote a companion piece to it, using a few of the lines from it, with his permission of course. Thank you Kimba, for the inspiration, the words and the danceflowerforyou ***

CaRisLOVE's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:29 AM
wow some of us really can write poetry
:wink:

eskimo_nell's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:29 AM
Aaaaaawwwwwww!! great poem cherub :heart:


peachiegirl28's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:30 AM
love awesome jenniflowerforyou

arcadefan's photo
Thu 12/20/07 04:36 AM
wow thx for sharing ((JENNI)) :smile: flowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:11 AM


flowerforyou Wonderful Jenni:smile:

browneyes_46's photo
Thu 12/20/07 05:23 AM
Beautiful Jenflowerforyou flowerforyou

songstress1's photo
Thu 12/20/07 06:57 AM
This is so beautiful...I know this feeling and it is a wonderful one. Thank you for putting it into words that I can carry around in my head..flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/20/07 07:31 AM
beautiful,,, simply beautiful flowerforyou :heart:

eileena9's photo
Thu 12/20/07 07:36 AM
This fits so beautifully with Kimba's. Beautiful job, {{{{{Sis}}}}flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou