Topic: ~After You Held my Hand~ | |
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You reached across the space between us Held my hand, for what seemed an eternity Everything that confused and befuddled me Now made sense and seemed logical And when we parted it seemed so strange The world so empty cold and gray You, the man, not a foolish adrenaline thug A man,firm yet yielding to the touch Calming yet wild enough to make me blush And I knew when I looked into your eyes That I wouldn't have to ask a second time That my wish would become your desire And my desire would become your wish Time would stop, and the world would cease to exist It would only be you and I, in this moments breath in time And I knew then at that moment that this one Is a 1 chance in a lifetime,not a once in awhile *** I was inspired after reading brwnkimba's piece "After We Held Hand's" and the words took form during the day yesterday, so I wrote a companion piece to it, using a few of the lines from it, with his permission of course. Thank you Kimba, for the inspiration, the words and the dance *** |
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wow some of us really can write poetry
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Aaaaaawwwwwww!! great poem cherub
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awesome jenni
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wow thx for sharing ((JENNI))
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Wonderful Jenni |
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Beautiful Jen
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This is so beautiful...I know this feeling and it is a wonderful one. Thank you for putting it into words that I can carry around in my head..
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beautiful,,, simply beautiful
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This fits so beautifully with Kimba's. Beautiful job, {{{{{Sis}}}}
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