Topic: A Bed Of Surrender
cowboy's photo
Mon 03/02/20 09:06 AM
Who can fathom this grief?
The heart of the universe broken
Stars fall from the sky like tears
Shall i wish upon one?
In every teardrop a glimmer of hope
Washing the countenance
Melting faces of stone
Like spring rain on winter snow
Faceless be
Nothing to face up to
No shame
No blame
No pain
Only sweet release
From what was
The light of what is
Flooding my vacant heart
Like a beggar that finds a home
And a bed of surrender
To rest his weary mind
Nothing to understand
Everything to be
We melt together
In being alone

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 03/02/20 11:28 AM
Beautiful.

cowboy's photo
Mon 03/02/20 11:35 AM
Thank you for your encouragement. I am really pretty new to writing poetry.

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 03/02/20 11:37 AM

Thank you for your encouragement. I am really pretty new to writing poetry.


You are a natural :smiley:

JulieABush's photo
Tue 03/03/20 04:19 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .