Topic: Silently Screaming... | |
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The thoughts that race the mind. The memories that are keep in tack. The secrets held inside. Open the mouth- no words come out. Silently silently Screaming... Pain, dread, misery. Wondering why, still need a cry. Fever inside, burning eternally on. Consumed with guilt, yet with pride. Silently silently Screaming... Only one. Perhaps there are tons. Weight of emense porportions. Anchoring down, watch don't drown. Looking for oars. Falls staight ahead. Silently silently Screaming... Dreams in the head. Nightmerishly played. Looking around. Wondering who else. Bandaides seen all over. Never ending booboo stream. Silently silently Screaming... Act out, Write, Talk, Sing. Find the cords, make a map. Weave a new way for to say. Abuses we suffer from day to day. Silently silently screaming... Open the mouth even though words may not come out- Silently silently scream... Silence broken, The scream is heard, you need'nt utter a single word. Silently silently Scream... **************************************************************** Susan (aka:Teddy) 12-18-07 |
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susan, it is?
great write. you've got some moves, its true. i bet you dance well. |
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Well put and very true!!!!
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Good work! I have a poem with the same title! he he...Don't worry, it's very different from yours!
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great write indeed
you go girl |
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Yes, yup, uh-huh, yessss!!!
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This was good, had some flow to it "rhyming lol" nice
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The mental picture of everything we don't say when were hurt. Nice job on conveying the front of what we can't say... Super...
Sometimes I wonder how days go by without someone knowing that inside ... whaaaaaaa.... Nice Job |
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Whoa sistah!!!!
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That was very good Susan...I've screamed in my time...but not anymore...very good indeed.
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I silently scream more times than I care to admit...excellent piece MzTeddy
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very nice
sometims our screams are not heard even if not so silently delivered |
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Excellent
The games we play in our mind To cover the pain Trying to hide it from ourselves Only to see the pain through our eyes Would give us such relief |
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