It's just too fu@#$#$ bad
That you couldn't see what you Fu@#$# had
Now your all lonely and Sad
That's just to Fu@#$# Bad

just the something i started singing...about 10 minutes ago lol. I need to think of some versus it could make a great break up song lol.

sounds pretty good so far

i gave you every thing
til there was nothing left
i gave you everything you had
you were so blind and now i find
that its just too f*cking bad

maybe that will help a little ..who knows...

u want a poem kinda thing to go with it for versus or u want some freestyle rhyming ****?

And it should come back to...

He's a lumberjack and he's ok
He sleeps all night and he works all day

Its 2 o'oclock in the morning
you want me to let you in
your cold the rain is pouring
you know what I was think-in? (chours)

Another I'm sorry
It's the same old story
Baby not this time
It's starting to bore me

you played me like a fool,
you played it cool,
but now I'm done with your sorry ass,
sorry sweetie but your voice is breaking glass.....

lol I try.

That wasn't bad at all...

I'm bout to get Vicious, fuk my Attitude/
I know some *****es who get tossed more than Salad's do/
But I ain't mad at you/
Im just sad it's you/
Cuz back in tha day, there wasn't One badder whooo/
You use to be the talk of the town when you was walkin around/
You use to walk with a Crown but now days the Boyz talkin you down/
N it's Ashame cuz you use to run the Game/T
hey said you was hotter than flames but now when we mention your name,/
they just laughin' there ass off cuz alot of em Banged/
It's makes me mad cuz you ain't see what you had/
You got caught up in the fads & lost track of your pad/
So you strayed & it was games you played/
If you stayed you woulda had it made

Chours

you dug your own grave/
Insisted to move & was caught in the Raid/
But you ain't care tho you enjoyed the weirdo's/
I offered to share more on my knee's til tears showed/
I couldn't see you get tossed/
But you refused my help so that was the cost in this World colder than frost/
You turnt to a Ho with Selfish Luck & started to self destruct/
Lost control after the buck & after they ****ed you wasn't **** but a Ho down on your luck/
But I stood by you & insisted to guide you/
True love I supplied you,
suprised you but now deep in my Heart Bich I despise you/

Chours

Knew you my whole life but ain't quite Understand/
Explained that this World is trife even tho its Sight is Wonderland/
But you ain't Listen & proceeded your Mission/
Lost position in the transition & after the fun was thru, they was done with you & you wasn't more than a mention/
But I understood the Message which was Urgent enclosed, you was a Virgin exposed/
In the beginning the One right man was chose but you froze, became a One night stand & got labeled with Ho's/
And I was caught in the glitch & couldn't time the pitch/
I should of knew it was comin' I felt the itch but now I feel dumb because in the end all you were was a dumb *****

Chorus


there ya go lol, i was bored so i wrote ya a whole song lol.

I like yours best Sherrie...I don't think the f'ing word should be used in a song in the first place...there I said it..I couldn't hold back...JMO

It's 2 in the morning
never any warning
bang on my door
back from your whoring

Another I'm sorry
It's the same old story
Baby not this time
It's starting to bore me

It's just too bad
You gave up what you had
Now you're lonely and sad
Why couldn't you see
Now it's just too Fu@#$# bad

Some things just have to be
this I gotta do for me
and it hurts so much
I just want to bleed

Just go away
find some other prey
I am so done
That's all I got to say

It's just too bad
You gave up what you had
Now you're lonely and sad
Why couldn't you see
Now it's just too Fu@#$# bad

Yeah
It is ...


It is too Fu@#$# bad

...

Oh my...sounded like you were rapping there Sherrie...I loved it all except you know what.

I don't care for the 'you know what' either but I was playing off an established chorus ... which I did soften


It is fun having a 3D technicolour imagination though ... I can slip into alter-egos when I write

Well you did rather well with it my fine Aussie friend...would love to have heard that with that accent.

You are confusing me with Jess again Wolf

I have the 'Canadian' accent

Hiding my head in sand like an ostrich...oh for shame...I should remember that because of Jess wearing her go to hell hat.

Wow,
Alot of awsome ideas. Some of you have some real talent appreciate the advice. Well ya all. I'm going on vacation for a week and won't be on here until about the 26th Have an awsome christmas and new year!

Isaac