Individual Symbiosis

If I expose my heart will you rip it open and laugh as I bleed to death
Or will you find compassion and humour buried beneath your hatred for me
You're practicing dying and dreaming of reincarnation as you smoke a cigarette
The masks are peeling away as you prepare to unravel the memories of feeling human
Darkness is swift to cover the feelings of being scared as you prepare to meet the end
A lifetime's sorrow, a lifetime's work rememebered by only an urn or a stone

If I expose my jugular would you pierce it with your teeth and gorge upon my blood
Self sanctifying with the warmth and the metalic taste of haemoglobin
I lay in your embrace pale, and my anticipation rising as my pulse begins to slow
You will always have a part of me that lives as long as you are willing to live
Individual symbiosis, so rare and so unique, yet unequivocal and definite
A lifetime's dreams, a lifetime's hopes resting in the heartbeat of another


Natalia-Jane

Decidedly Delicious
"i like that"

Thankyouverymuch, that's very kind

Hummm actually really liked it hope to see more.

Thanks TxsGal, again that's very kind....rest assured I haven't finished just yet

Natalia Jane

That was pretty good
Dark is not always bad
Sometimes we see quite clear there

True for one must be able to see the dark to appreciate the light.

wicked ...and i like!

((txsgal)) i like your pic!

Thanks to all you lovely people for being so kind

oh so nice and delicious

Like a artwork to be submissive or not to be.
I felt the claws dig my flesh on that one.
The cigarette lit after the climax knowing the
ice cream and two spoons are in need.
Very driving.Peeled the chrome off my wit.

i like the dark stuff.

If I expose my jugular would you pierce it with your teeth and gorge upon my blood
Self sanctifying with the warmth and the metalic taste of haemoglobin

this one had some good lines that gave u pictures in your head

Very well written. I can't say I'd like to live in that dream as I'm all about the fluffy clouds and cupids arrows.

However, it does bring about it a certain submissive quality in that you are allowing someone to take you anyway they want while you expose yourself.

Begs the question why you would expose yourself to someone that way. I know I have.

I'll go with a scary 4 out of 5 stars. I always need a happy ending.