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Topic: A Dreamer's Tapestry
trustingfate Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2040	Sun 12/16/07 03:38 AM
In quiet rooms I hide my tears I hide a heart that's breaking A dreamers weave slowly unfurls and vanishes in waking The dream so sweet 'twas bitter A heart nieve was blind And in the dawn's sweet beauty, Dearer beauty's left behind. The weave is gone, forgotten, no longer can be seen except in the dreamer's memory, where it will live eturnally

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 12/16/07 04:10 AM
gathering up this cloth to take to another thread.... http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18029

trustingfate Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2040	Sun 12/16/07 04:22 AM
I see that there has been a lot of weaving going on tonight...

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sun 12/16/07 04:25 AM
oh that is an ancient thread.... but a beautiful place to for mending....

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 12/16/07 10:20 AM
That was really good TF...I really enjoyed that one.

sealove42 Joined Sun 12/16/07 Posts: 438	Sun 12/16/07 08:05 PM
Nice description of dream weaving. Nice job trustingfate.

UWannaBSpontaneous Joined Sat 10/20/07 Posts: 756	Sun 12/16/07 08:08 PM
Thorough and vivid!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sun 12/16/07 08:30 PM
Very good girl

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sun 12/16/07 08:37 PM
Huge sigh, so very nicely done...................

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