Topic: Storm of Heart
trustingfate's photo
Sun 12/16/07 03:36 AM
I'm on a journey across a sea of waves and foam
My soul is lost and weary on it's journey for it's home
Some haven it can turn to in this dark confusing haze
A becon which could show it the conclusion to this maze
for one wrong turn could lose me from here to siren's home
leaving me to drift forever lost at sea to roam
How long can one stay anchored here-thunder deaf and lightning blind?
Before the world continues on, forever leaving me behind...
Terror closes in as the storm of heart grows stronger,
I fear without a guiding light I can't hold on much longer
My reason wars with logic and my logic wars with heart
I know before this storm is over, I will be torn apart

LastChance's photo
Sun 12/16/07 04:13 AM
Very nice..Strong..I like it!

trustingfate's photo
Sun 12/16/07 04:20 AM
(((LastChance)))flowerforyou thank you!

Long time no see!

LastChance's photo
Sun 12/16/07 04:21 AM
(((trustingfate))) flowerforyou You are very welcome!

s1owhand's photo
Sun 12/16/07 04:58 AM
surrender yourself
to see

flowerforyou :wink:

Noden's photo
Sun 12/16/07 05:32 AM
Trusting, deep girl, deep climb out before you get lost....smokin smokin smokin

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 12/16/07 10:11 AM
Hey TF...that was really good...I love the way you made the simile. I loved it.

sealove42's photo
Sun 12/16/07 09:01 PM
I enjoyed your poem and appreciate the symbolism to life. Thank you for sharing.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 12/16/07 09:02 PM
Another real good oneflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 12/16/07 10:39 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart: