Topic: Storm of Heart | |
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I'm on a journey across a sea of waves and foam
My soul is lost and weary on it's journey for it's home Some haven it can turn to in this dark confusing haze A becon which could show it the conclusion to this maze for one wrong turn could lose me from here to siren's home leaving me to drift forever lost at sea to roam How long can one stay anchored here-thunder deaf and lightning blind? Before the world continues on, forever leaving me behind... Terror closes in as the storm of heart grows stronger, I fear without a guiding light I can't hold on much longer My reason wars with logic and my logic wars with heart I know before this storm is over, I will be torn apart |
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Very nice..Strong..I like it!
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(((LastChance))) thank you!
Long time no see! |
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(((trustingfate))) You are very welcome!
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surrender yourself
to see |
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Trusting, deep girl, deep climb out before you get lost....
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Hey TF...that was really good...I love the way you made the simile. I loved it.
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I enjoyed your poem and appreciate the symbolism to life. Thank you for sharing.
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Another real good one
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