Topic: What do you do when the music stops?
Vitolo 's photo
Sun 11/03/19 09:41 PM
What do you do when the music stops?,
And the sun no longer shines through the pane(pain?),
The thin eggshell of your existence POPS,
And instead of sunshine you’re touched by the
rain.
Reality lashes it’s long sharp tongue,
As naked you stand...You can no longer hide,
Searching for friends to stand among,
Just to have that tongue shove you aside.
There’s no hiding behind your youth anymore,
For youth, like yon eggshell , teeters and drops...
Like Humpty Dumpty -- impossible
to restore!
What do you do when the music stops?

JulieABush's photo
Mon 11/04/19 04:04 AM
Nice poem:wink: :thumbsup: .

Vitolo 's photo
Mon 11/04/19 09:30 AM
You are very kind.

Windplay's photo
Thu 12/05/19 12:36 AM
Dance out of the eggshell, into the new you. Recreate yourself.
Great poem, I related to it well.