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“Lonely”
Do you ever get lonely? Being the one and only. As you watch others go by. It is hard for us to deny. That it would be nice. Just to have the peace. To know we have found That special one to be around. Do you ever feel so alone? You feel as if you’re unknown. That no one knows your there. And life seems so unfair. At times do you wonder? That you’re sinking and going under. But even then no one would pay attention. Just leave you hanging in suspension. As if they did not even hear. You wish you could just disappear. Away from it all cause no one. Would even know you were gone in the long run. Just hide up in the mountains in a cabin. You only tell your next of kin. That way you don’t have to care. If anyone at all is aware. Because they never knew you were there. Nor did they see you shed a tear. Or know of your fear. As you walk into the shadows to disappear. K.L.M 12/13/2007 |
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did u write this?
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She does beautiful things with words. I read most of the poems she writes and post on here. Keep it up TxsGal ur awesome!
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lavos28 yes it is all mine sat here and wrote it tonight while talking to friends on the IM. Promise all of mine are mine. Thank you for reading and welcome to the site.
xander29 awww your way to kind thank you very very much from the bottom of my heart you just made my day thank you |
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wow its really good...you def have a talent
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Great as usual...I really enjoyed reading this Kristi.
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wow its really good...you def have a talent thank you so much your very kind just write what comes from my heart and reality. |
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Can't tell you Kristi how many times I have had those same thoughts...like being invisible.
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tg3333
So many wonderful words come from you thank you for sharing them |
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songstress1 thank you girl for yur kind words
shutterbug ohhhhhhhh don't we all don't we all. kc0003 yur way to kind my friend you have the gift of the words and I do so enjoy reading them as well |
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I'm feelin that poem right now Kristi...
Ive missed reading your stuff. |
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That poem was totally awesome. Seriously, you never cease to amaze me.
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clancybee
klugman I hear ya my friend but don't let those shadows over take you it is so easy to fall prey to them. Hey ya need to talk I'm only a click away |
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An Angel who see's, feel's and knows the pains we all have felt at times,,, Your words inspire your words heal,,
Love you (((( Puddin Cup )))) May your Christmas be blessed,,, hug that beautiful granddaughter for me all my love to you and the kids,,, Love you |
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To be lonely one must have nothing to be happy for... WOw thats deep well done on the poem, i generally dont post regarding poems
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Cl1180 thank you very much for reading and your kind words as well
Denise ((((((((((((Buttercup)))))))))))) my sweet friend indeed ohhh I hear the words so much from others and those is what inspires the words upon the page to read. I have felt that pain before and know it is real. Awwww and Merry Christmas to you and your family as well. Awww hug the Grandbaby every time I see her I get plenty of hugs lol KalamazooGuy87 well thank you very much for reading but at times those that feel lonely is due to many things at times. Thank you for your kind words indeed. My self I have plenty to be happy for but so many more feel this everyday. |
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no one is lonely deep inside buddy
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Hummm well then are they alone
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