Topic: Fall From Grace (Epiphany)
Mike91ZX's photo
Thu 12/13/07 04:15 AM
It's an uphill battle, every single day
Tears fall like rain, the pain is on its way
The clouds form a halo above the man's head
She saw what he did, not what he said

The thunder roars an echo across the floor
One after another, bad decisions galore
He draws in breath to feed his mind
Vision's blurry, he's going blind

He just wanted to make her smile
See her happy face for awhile
He wasn't too smart, bad move on his part
He broke her heart, it was doomed from the start

It just wasn't meant to be
Someday he'll see
How Love conquers all
No matter how far you fall

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 12/13/07 07:48 AM
Very nice and welcome to the site as well hope to see more
of your workbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Thu 12/13/07 08:13 AM
Love is an amazing thing,,, Nice really nice,,
Welcome to JSH flowerforyou flowerforyou

Mike91ZX's photo
Thu 12/13/07 11:47 AM
Thanks for the kind words. I'm coming off a pretty bad night last night, and the poem is about it, so I'm glad I could bring a smile to someone's face ^_^.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 12/13/07 05:20 PM
Good write... flowerforyou
Hope things get better for you...