My lady I have pledged my life to serve you...
I don't know what to say
I follow you anywhere but if you want me to just walk away from the Kingdom
I'll respect your wishes
I have served my tour giving you life and so much more
I have pledged a thousand men to replace me should I no longer fill your need to serve you
My goddess my lonely flame
Together we were so bright this energy just kept spinning
And as beautiful as it got I kept picturing it further
Turning each tear into promise and life beyond reason
Kept you tomorrow till yesterday and each time I looked into your eyes
I saw a future so deep and lost in those eyes like another world
A world I must explore but I have to respect you
Just let you come back if it's ever meant to be
I can't make you anything but free and in being me I give you life and liberty
No matter how close my heart is I'm not far behind
But do decide soon before I pledge my sword to another
And this lonely knight wonders if I ever did anything wrong telling you the truth

Beautiful!

Ahhh river spriit… If only time wasn't keeping us apart I might find myself tied up with a lasso stored in your closet for safekeeping ;)… I find a lot of times what I write has a lot if not thousands of meanings... s picture is worth a thousand words or whatever your art may be... all of us sre nerds at something even sports nerds... that we keep blaming the other for not contributing when all of us are doing whatever we can to keep pushing forward... Our own limitations of heart can make us powerful not weaker and no matter how scarred a soul is they are still beautiful on the inside as long as they care....

Nice poem .

Ahhh... your words capture my heart, though time and destiny keep us apart.

Final Dreamz, you have a beautiful soul... your gift of writing emanates that, and touches on the true essence of our existence. Very powerful and thought provoking... a beautiful way to awaken the spirit within.

Thank you for sharing

Nice m8..
Silk tongued. :)

Just back off my m8 River ok? back off. :)

Gallantry suits you

The River in Steve's life is pure
A noble soul full of spirit and free will
If one could cspture such a maiden who am I to stand up to such heroism
I seek a lot of things in this world have upset a few people just living my life
What I am not stupid enough to do is to stand in-between a man's dream
He builds it he keeps it secure and stable if she is his they belong to each other and no one else
I wish you two a life of comfort in each other and somehow through all the days that poetry is spoken though a little odd the writers just get weirder with time :S
That each of us has this voice and in finding each other in finding a blessing you have mine...

The River you speak of stands on her own
Til two souls meet she walks alone
Her soul is pure her spirit strong
Perhaps one day he'll hear her song
Time and distance will matter not
When destiny calls she can be caught

Liked your poem too River Spirit .

Thanks Julie

If only more men listened to what a woman has to say
The world would be 50% more efficient
It's a shame people cower in the night
Sleeping in their beds of silk and cotton thinking
By God I have a great life getting her to do what I want
The little sad truths of life
We can run in fear of a dog that sleeps on the patio
And never escape us from opening that door that leads us to the perfect house to live in
Our dreams our endless possibilities to see that dream come true
Do not exist because we are scared to open that door and find the perfect thing we need in our lives
I have tried I have pleaded with God to give me that perfect existence
And somehow someway he's telling me opening your damn eyes man I have given you the perfect life because you actually listen to what someone has to say
And combining our answers forms us to make this perfect lives through everyone we meet making us better people
And when that dog begins to sleep it wakes up to you giving it a bone and becomes your best friend...

Lots of beautiful writing in here

Majestic is a name for royalty ;)