Topic: Deathbed?
lizardking19's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:14 AM
Edited by lizardking19 on Mon 12/10/07 10:42 AM
You were THIS close to enlightenment
Only to be dragged backwards by the breathing tubes and ivs above the hospital bed
Almost realizing
All you ever wanted was someone to whisper to
Before the machines failed

peachiegirl28's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:15 AM
sad sad sad sad sad flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:16 AM
:cry: brokenheart flowerforyou

JazzieJoHanna's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:17 AM
THAT IS SOOO TRAGIC!

Sexyklp4U's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:41 AM
very depressing:cry:

lizardking19's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:47 AM
its good 2 know i can evoke such responsesbigsmile

ariesboy's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:51 AM
make sure there are no guns around this guy....lol.

lizardking19's photo
Mon 12/10/07 10:56 AM
Ive got plenty of other (better) poetry on this site and nobody responds to it!
who needs guns when ive got WORDS?!