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Edited by
lizardking19
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Mon 12/10/07 10:42 AM
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You were THIS close to enlightenment
Only to be dragged backwards by the breathing tubes and ivs above the hospital bed Almost realizing All you ever wanted was someone to whisper to Before the machines failed |
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THAT IS SOOO TRAGIC!
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very depressing
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its good 2 know i can evoke such responses
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make sure there are no guns around this guy....lol.
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Ive got plenty of other (better) poetry on this site and nobody responds to it!
who needs guns when ive got WORDS?! |
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