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Topic: Condiments Condoms & Condemnation
technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Sat 03/09/19 02:09 PM
Unfed hunger; prophylactic cellophane cannot preserve freshness forever. Upending the bottle may shake muddy feelings free. Though... no amount of catch-up, will garnish the absence of something sweet to relish. Dressing wounds with contaminated ointment, covered by recycled bandages, incubates dis-ease. Experimental concoctions could stimulate a healing appetite. However... secret sauces, run risk of going stale and putrid, while awaiting taste test approval.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sat 03/09/19 02:25 PM
Goodness, techno, you're the only one who can put those three C's together and come up with an absolutely brilliant poem... albeit a little gross and disgusting, nevertheless brilliant.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Sat 03/09/19 02:42 PM
Thanks, Rosie. I appreciate that you had the stomach to make through this one.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Sat 03/09/19 02:45 PM
You're welcome, my very talented friend

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 03/11/19 02:40 AM
Um?

Aroundtheworld37 Joined Tue 07/18/17 Posts: 934	Mon 03/11/19 07:02 AM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1542	Mon 03/11/19 08:18 AM
I like this . . . though I'll stick with ranch dressing

Queenie Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 16001	Mon 03/11/19 08:30 AM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this

Aroundtheworld37 Joined Tue 07/18/17 Posts: 934	Mon 03/11/19 09:41 AM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this Ma twinnie

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 03:00 PM
Um? It's only disturbing if you take it literally, Ladywind.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 04:10 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol What's also fun is that you may never know if it means what you think it does. Thanks for checking it out and sharing some feedback. I really appreciate it, ATW.

Aroundtheworld37 Joined Tue 07/18/17 Posts: 934	Mon 03/11/19 04:12 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol What's also fun is that you may never know if it means what you think it does. Thanks for checking it out and sharing some feedback. I really appreciate it, ATW. I think that was what got me I actually read several meanings into this piece but it might just be my warped mind

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 04:40 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this Ma twinnie Twins smooching... Yowza! Can the poet who inspired that yummy display of affection get in on the action?

Aroundtheworld37 Joined Tue 07/18/17 Posts: 934	Mon 03/11/19 06:19 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this Ma twinnie Twins smooching... Yowza! Can the poet who inspired that yummy display of affection get in on the action? Come and knock on my door we’ll be waiting for you where the kisses our hers and hers and his ‍♀️

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 06:35 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this Ma twinnie Twins smooching... Yowza! Can the poet who inspired that yummy display of affection get in on the action? Come and knock on my door we’ll be waiting for you where the kisses our hers and hers and his ‍♀️ Three's company too!

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 06:50 PM
Love this so fun and in your face two thumbs up lol Yes this Thanks, Queenie. I really appreciate you taking a look and chiming in.

Queenie Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 16001	Mon 03/11/19 07:22 PM
very welcome and thank you for sharing

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2646	Mon 03/11/19 09:05 PM
I like this . . . though I'll stick with ranch dressing A respectable choice. Thanks, mig. I really appreciate you reading it and giving some feedback.