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I dressed your wounds,
poured salve all over you. and anointed you with oil. You drank to your health, to the sun, to midday, to the moon. And never stopped. Not marriage, nor harm reached you. When the rope took your last breathe, I pray Angels came for you, held you in their arms and took you to eternal peace. You will be alive in our last words of forgiveness to each other. |
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Very profound. Reminds me of someone who was close to me This was a past member of mingle, my husband poppashroom. May he rest in peace |
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So sorry ladywind I didn’t know him personally but I did read a lot of his poems as well as yours he seemed like a good person as well as an amazing poet I’m so sorry for your loss
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So sorry ladywind I didn’t know him personally but I did read a lot of his poems as well as yours he seemed like a good person as well as an amazing poet I’m so sorry for your loss Thank you, he struggled with mental health. He has left behind unbearable pain for all of us who loved him |
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Sending hugs |
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So sorry ladywind I didn’t know him personally but I did read a lot of his poems as well as yours he seemed like a good person as well as an amazing poet I’m so sorry for your loss Thank you, he struggled with mental health. He has left behind unbearable pain for all of us who loved him Yes I can understand...it’s difficult to be inside your own head and skin for those that don’t struggle with it I think it’s so hard for them to understand ...sending hugs your way |
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So sorry ladywind I didn’t know him personally but I did read a lot of his poems as well as yours he seemed like a good person as well as an amazing poet I’m so sorry for your loss Thank you, he struggled with mental health. He has left behind unbearable pain for all of us who loved him Yes I can understand...it’s difficult to be inside your own head and skin for those that don’t struggle with it I think it’s so hard for them to understand ...sending hugs your way Thank you again for caring, your words mean a lot to me xx |
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(((Hugs))) Ladywind
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(((Hugs))) Ladywind Thank you Queenie |
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Last words are as important as the perfect number of syllables and architecture of this write... I did not expect to see poetry here, no...not at all but am both surprised and inspired by the depth and evocative quality of my very first read in this particular site. I hope to read more from you and others and, if it doesn't cost me, then I'm keen to post something myself. Enjoyed
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Last words are as important as the perfect number of syllables and architecture of this write... I did not expect to see poetry here, no...not at all but am both surprised and inspired by the depth and evocative quality of my very first read in this particular site. I hope to read more from you and others and, if it doesn't cost me, then I'm keen to post something myself. Enjoyed Thank you |
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Very emotional Ladywind7 .
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Very emotional Ladywind7 . Love and death are very emotional experiences Julie I think I am blessed to put my emotions into words that many can connect with. Thanks babe x |
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