Topic: Poetic Mind state. | |
---|---|
I'm looking for people that think!!!!!!!!!!! I am a very complex person.
I have alot of things I think about, and ways I express them. So post some poetry, and I will share mine with you. |
|
|
|
Heres one of mine.... To get people started this one is about love.
So as I stand with pride in hand My grip so slowly slippin Like frigile glass the time will pass Like cracking seconds ticking Now face-to-face and toe-to-toe We stand-off eye-to-eye With one great steo and two big breaths We stand now side-by-side Out steps a mand with great ole hands A book he opens wide Now hand and hand with pride we stand There's brilliance in your eyes The ugly truth has lost its roots So we may plant this seed You held your own but your not alone Together we must breathe And at this time I look behind At this time we have taken If only you and this dream were true....... "But now I must awaken" I can't wait for this kind of love to come to me. Till I can find the women that I can say I do |
|
|
|
OMG! Thats an awesome poem!! I have a few poems that I wrote, but I
don't have them with me right now....when I get them I'll post one!! |
|
|
|
We do have a poetry forum that you are both more than welcomed to post
in :) |
|
|
|
are you sure it's your PRIDE in yer hand???
|
|
|
|
awesome poem
|
|
|
|
LATEST.....
As I ascended from the dreams of my parental beings and became human flesh I took air into my lungs and called it "breath" my bones solidified so that I could take steps but I took giant leaps into the depths and got stronger off 10 to 12 reps my surroundings gave birth to new concepts broke down theories that were too complex my mind-set became convex concaved in footsteps paths laid became detangled followed pathways through triangles and traveled through time-tables unraveled information like fiber-optic cable channeled through constant elevation contemplation led to revelation revelation was said to be the ending but the the end began new beginnings the ending was the reason and it all came full circle through completion rEVELATION I HAVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT IT LATELY. |
|
|
|
not bad for a white guy! :)
|
|
|
|
roflmao! at "VANCHAU"....lol...
no really y'all needs to go up to potst them in poems.,.. lots of good works in there,you can post yer own works there too trust me,,,I do... LOVE good poetry,and I try to write some myself, if I like a spicific poem...I might hop in an tag it with one of my own,but it only means I liked ti |
|
|