Topic: Poetic Mind state.
Jeff1086's photo
Thu 11/16/06 10:55 AM
I'm looking for people that think!!!!!!!!!!! I am a very complex person.
I have alot of things I think about, and ways I express them. So post
some poetry, and I will share mine with you.

Jeff1086's photo
Thu 11/16/06 06:02 PM
Heres one of mine.... To get people started this one is about love.


So as I stand with pride in hand
My grip so slowly slippin
Like frigile glass the time will pass
Like cracking seconds ticking

Now face-to-face and toe-to-toe
We stand-off eye-to-eye
With one great steo and two big breaths
We stand now side-by-side

Out steps a mand with great ole hands
A book he opens wide
Now hand and hand with pride we stand
There's brilliance in your eyes

The ugly truth has lost its roots
So we may plant this seed
You held your own but your not alone
Together we must breathe

And at this time I look behind
At this time we have taken
If only you and this dream were true.......
"But now I must awaken"

I can't wait for this kind of love to come to me. Till I can find the
women that I can say I do

Innocent69's photo
Sun 11/19/06 09:52 AM
OMG! Thats an awesome poem!! I have a few poems that I wrote, but I
don't have them with me right now....when I get them I'll post one!!

no photo
Sun 11/19/06 02:12 PM
We do have a poetry forum that you are both more than welcomed to post
in :)

michael1313's photo
Tue 11/21/06 07:19 AM
are you sure it's your PRIDE in yer hand???

ford95babe's photo
Tue 11/21/06 09:51 PM
awesome poem

Jeff1086's photo
Thu 11/30/06 09:36 PM
LATEST.....

As I ascended from the dreams of my parental beings
and became human flesh
I took air into my lungs and called it "breath"
my bones solidified so that I could take steps
but I took giant leaps into the depths
and got stronger off 10 to 12 reps
my surroundings gave birth to new concepts
broke down theories that were too complex
my mind-set became convex
concaved in footsteps
paths laid became detangled
followed pathways through triangles
and traveled through time-tables
unraveled information like fiber-optic cable
channeled through constant elevation
contemplation led to revelation
revelation was said to be the ending
but the the end began new beginnings
the ending was the reason
and it all came full circle through completion


rEVELATION I HAVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT IT LATELY.

vanchau's photo
Thu 11/30/06 11:28 PM
not bad for a white guy! :)

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/01/06 12:49 AM
roflmao! at "VANCHAU"....lol...

no really y'all needs to go up to potst them in poems.,..
lots of good works in there,you can post yer own works there too
trust me,,,I do...

LOVE good poetry,and I try to write some myself,
if I like a spicific poem...I might hop in an tag it with one of my
own,but it only means I liked ti