Topic: Despair
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Thu 11/08/18 12:38 AM
Why you became so important to me,
Everyone else seemed to fade,
Why you mattered so much that,
You started to seem like my soulmate..

You were always on my mind,
Whether I was awake or asleep,
You made me smile,
You made me weep,
You made me feel that all happiness,
Was at my feet..

I have so much more to say,
But I keep quiet,
Donno know where to start,
And where to end,
Afraid to mess up,
Afraid to offend again..

I was beautiful and you were handsome,
We would have made a lovely pair,
But its too late now and you are gone,
And I am left all alone,
Sinking in this well of never-ending despair.

technovative's photo
Fri 11/09/18 05:27 PM
Relatable expression of emotion.

actionlynx's photo
Fri 11/09/18 06:31 PM
I always feel so sad when I read your poems.

Longing. Regret. Loneliness.

If your poems reflect how you truly feel, I hope you someday find your match. Despite whatever problems you've faced, you're too beautiful not to find someone. And I don't just mean on the outside. Your poetry always demonstrates an inner beauty that someday someone will discover and cherish.

flowerforyou

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Fri 11/09/18 07:53 PM

Relatable expression of emotion.


Thanks smile2

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Fri 11/09/18 07:54 PM

I always feel so sad when I read your poems.

Longing. Regret. Loneliness.

If your poems reflect how you truly feel, I hope you someday find your match. Despite whatever problems you've faced, you're too beautiful not to find someone. And I don't just mean on the outside. Your poetry always demonstrates an inner beauty that someday someone will discover and cherish.

flowerforyou


Thank you for your lovely words smile2

Ladywind7's photo
Mon 11/12/18 11:56 PM
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Tue 11/13/18 01:05 AM

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NorthernFlicka's photo
Sun 11/18/18 12:16 PM
Beautiful I was
And you oh so handsome dear
Tulips failed to bloom

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Sun 11/18/18 01:16 PM

Beautiful I was
And you oh so handsome dear
Tulips failed to bloom

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