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If you mention my name
I will fall to my knees, With tears in my eyes as I start to say please, I reach for your hand grasp nothing but air, My thoughts are of you but you are not there, I must have been wrong when I thought of you near, As I struggle to speak amid hiding the fear, You needed the truth which I gave from the heart, But I was a target you pierced with your dart. |
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Nice write
Sometimes.. I wonder just what might have been as I sit all alone in my chair in the den the silence so lonely as I often am the time passes slowly as only it can the minutes forgotten but not those of you my one and my only the girl I once knew How's this one..you like..you can have it..took me ten minutes..sometimes writing is like that you know..keep on writing..tc |
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Very nice both of you
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TY Tomb, yours was also a nice write.
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TY Queen
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Both are touching
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