Topic: You Left
Poetrywriter's photo
Fri 11/02/18 10:34 AM
If you mention my name
I will fall to my knees,
With tears in my eyes
as I start to say please,
I reach for your hand
grasp nothing but air,
My thoughts are of you
but you are not there,
I must have been wrong
when I thought of you near,
As I struggle to speak
amid hiding the fear,
You needed the truth
which I gave from the heart,
But I was a target
you pierced with your dart.


no photo
Fri 11/02/18 04:27 PM
Nice write


Sometimes.. I wonder
just what might have been
as I sit all alone
in my chair in the den
the silence so lonely
as I often am
the time passes slowly
as only it can
the minutes forgotten
but not those of you
my one and my only
the girl I once knew


How's this one..you like..you can have it..took me ten minutes..sometimes writing is like that you know..keep on writing..tc

no photo
Fri 11/02/18 06:39 PM
Very nice both of you

Poetrywriter's photo
Fri 11/02/18 07:18 PM
TY Tomb, yours was also a nice write.

Poetrywriter's photo
Fri 11/02/18 07:18 PM
TY Queen

dreamerana's photo
Fri 11/23/18 09:18 PM
Both are touching