MY FATE HAS BEEN SEALED
THERE IS NO APPEAL,
MY IMPENDING LOSS
IS VERY VERY REAL.

SHE TOSSED ME AWAY
QUICKLY ON THAT DAY
SHE WROTE ME A NOTE
WITH WORDS FROM HER HEART
SAID SHE FELT WE HAD TO PART.

MY SOUL IS BLEEDING
SLOWLY TO DIE
I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT HER
IS MY REASON WHY
NOW,,,DEAR,,
GOODBYE!!!

look on the bright side..you r free no more whinning or bothering thee...go out get drunk and laid..soon you will realize you have it made.....Dave

That is a good one! Here is one I wrote...

Torn
By Sylent1

I watched you pack your suitcase today.
I could barely breathe as I watched.
The scent of your perfume still filled the air.
The taste of your nectar was still on my lips.
I watched you pack your suitcase today.
I could barely breathe as I watched.
The memory of us making love was still ablaze in my mind.
I could vividly remember the passion in your touch.
I watched you pack your suitcase today.
I could barely breathe as I watched.
I watched as you pack all your intimate things.
I watched as you neatly folded our passions away.
I watched you pack your suitcase today.
I could barely breathe as I watched.
I wanted to scream to you at the top of my lungs.
I wanted to beg “please don’t go”.
I watched you pack your suitcase today.
I could barely breathe as I watched.
As you quietly walked out of our door today;
You silently tore me apart.