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“Will it be you?”
Is it you that I see. Do you hold the key? Will you be the one to unlock? My heart and with me will walk. Here along beside me each day. And give me the kind of love that will stay. One that will make my heart shine. And vow to be only mine. Right beside me you will stand. And we will walk hand n hand. Will you be the one I can count on? Will it be you I can depend upon? To always be there for me. And I would never have to plea. Will you wipe away my tears? And chase away my fears. Will it be me you will miss? And upon my lips you will leave a kiss. Leaving me yearning for more. As we take time to explore. Will it be you I hear whisper my name? As I hear you proclaim. That it is me you want to see. And right here is were you want to be. K.L.M 12/6/2007 |
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wow Kristi that was great!!
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Kristi...
Just beautiful honey!!! |
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww your light shining so bright,,, Your words once again pour from your heart,,, Beautiful just Beautiful as is the Women the Soul who wrote it...
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Beautiful writing as always.
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Songstress1 thank you very much for your kind words.
Puffins awwww thanks girl (((((((((Buttercup))))))))your just too sweet your soul shines brighter than ever these days indeed. pkd thank you so much for your kind words. |
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it could be me if you have a real picture of thee...
no woman is an island to walk hand and hand is what we all want someone true and no games...not mean and not insane... keep it real and be who you are... and soon someone will be your shinning star... |
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TG3333
i hope you find the place "you want to be" |
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That is a beautiful poem. Here is one I wrote...
Sincerely By Sylent1 The wind sooths the itching in my brain. Calming the vexes of this life that consume me. The silence possesses me as I walk away. Seeping into every part of my being. The crushing of fallen leaves frees my soul. My burdens die every time the earth and I unite All that is left in my soul is you. You replace all the dross in me. The sweetness of you fills me. Your love is the only thing left in my shell. Come with me my love. Loosen your paradigm and let me lead. Free your mind and follow me. I can lead now that I am pure. I can carry you away from your troubles. I desire you to fill my being. Love me with all of you. I love you sincerely with all of me |
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rockman thank you for yours as well one must only click to see the pics within for they are all there nothing to hide here.
kc awwww I will for that day will come I'm sure of it I'm in no hurry to find that place for I know when I do it will be like heaven itself. Joel thank you very much for your kind words and sharing yours as well very good indeed welcome to the site and hope to see you post more in the future. |
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I am in awe of such beautifully written poetry! They conjure mental pictures that blend with the flow of your chosen words.
Thank-you for sharing these feelings |
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thank you for sharing kristi.. hope you find that speical person
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4 time editor's choice award...lol
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I hope Kristi...to whomever it may be...he puts a song in your heart, a light in your eyes, and a smile on your face that is never ending...you deserve it sweetie. Beautiful poem.
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synfullygood aww your words are too kind thank you so much for reading and welcome to the site as well
ardadefan aww thank you my friend ohhh I will one day as you will also rockman heheheh no awards here just words from the heart is all |
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