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Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy,
relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy! Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange. Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range. You're so sweet, kind, and smart! She says with sincerity... Though I’m afraid I must depart, due to the following disparity: You don't work 9 to 5... this is cause for concern. How could you afford to contribute to the lifestyle that I yearn? Must I purchase the right to breath? No... Has sunlight become a taxable resource? Not yet... Then why must I pay an admission fee, to enter the theater of romantic connection? The sign at the door reads: No regular job... No place of your own… No chance! No affection! |
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Have you ever been published?
Do you write for pleasure? Your writings are very good and inspirational. |
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but a chance at peace
from the world of divine as the music in your heart seem to never skip a beat as the words that are spoken speaks the words of the colors all away around |
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Have you ever been published? Do you write for pleasure? Your writings are very good and inspirational. I've never been published. I write as a hobby, and as an outlet for expression. I appreciate that you like reading some of my poems, and thank you for the nice compliment. |
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but a chance at peace from the world of divine as the music in your heart seem to never skip a beat as the words that are spoken speaks the words of the colors all away around I appreciate your kind attention. |
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Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy, relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy! Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange. Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range. You're so sweet, kind, and smart! She says with sincerity... Though I’m afraid I must depart, due to the following disparity: You don't work 9 to 5... this is cause for concern. How could you afford to contribute to the lifestyle that I yearn? Must I purchase the right to breath? No... Has sunlight become a taxable resource? Not yet... Then why must I pay an admission fee, to enter the theater of romantic connection? The sign at the door reads: No regular job... No place of your own… No chance! No affection! |
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Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy, relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy! Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange. Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range. You're so sweet, kind, and smart! She says with sincerity... Though I’m afraid I must depart, due to the following disparity: You don't work 9 to 5... this is cause for concern. How could you afford to contribute to the lifestyle that I yearn? Must I purchase the right to breath? No... Has sunlight become a taxable resource? Not yet... Then why must I pay an admission fee, to enter the theater of romantic connection? The sign at the door reads: No regular job... No place of your own… No chance! No affection! Thanks kiwigirl. |
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