Topic: The Price of Admission
technovative's photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:23 PM
Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy,
relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy!
Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange.
Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range.

You're so sweet, kind, and smart!
She says with sincerity...
Though I’m afraid I must depart,
due to the following disparity:

You don't work 9 to 5...
this is cause for concern.
How could you afford to contribute
to the lifestyle that I yearn?

Must I purchase the right to breath?
No...
Has sunlight become a taxable resource?
Not yet...
Then why must I pay an admission fee,
to enter the theater of romantic connection?
The sign at the door reads:
No regular job...
No place of your own…
No chance!
No affection!

no photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:25 PM
Have you ever been published?

Do you write for pleasure? Your writings are very good and inspirational.

Queene123's photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:28 PM
but a chance at peace
from the world of divine
as the music in your heart
seem to never skip a beat
as the words that are spoken
speaks the words of the
colors all away around

technovative's photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:37 PM

Have you ever been published?

Do you write for pleasure? Your writings are very good and inspirational.


I've never been published. I write as a hobby, and as an outlet for expression. I appreciate that you like reading some of my poems, and thank you for the nice compliment.

technovative's photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:38 PM

but a chance at peace
from the world of divine
as the music in your heart
seem to never skip a beat
as the words that are spoken
speaks the words of the
colors all away around


I appreciate your kind attention.

no photo
Sun 06/03/18 02:50 PM

Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy,
relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy!
Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange.
Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range.

You're so sweet, kind, and smart!
She says with sincerity...
Though I’m afraid I must depart,
due to the following disparity:

You don't work 9 to 5...
this is cause for concern.
How could you afford to contribute
to the lifestyle that I yearn?

Must I purchase the right to breath?
No...
Has sunlight become a taxable resource?
Not yet...
Then why must I pay an admission fee,
to enter the theater of romantic connection?
The sign at the door reads:
No regular job...
No place of your own…
No chance!
No affection!
awww techno .. there are many who are not materialistic in life .. you will find her smitten waving

technovative's photo
Sun 06/03/18 03:05 PM


Flashes of promise, surging rush of joy,
relief from longing is on the cusp for this lonely boy!
Smiles and laughs flow like the words we exchange.
Mutual attraction emerges, compatibility within range.

You're so sweet, kind, and smart!
She says with sincerity...
Though I’m afraid I must depart,
due to the following disparity:

You don't work 9 to 5...
this is cause for concern.
How could you afford to contribute
to the lifestyle that I yearn?

Must I purchase the right to breath?
No...
Has sunlight become a taxable resource?
Not yet...
Then why must I pay an admission fee,
to enter the theater of romantic connection?
The sign at the door reads:
No regular job...
No place of your own…
No chance!
No affection!
awww techno .. there are many who are not materialistic in life .. you will find her smitten waving


Thanks kiwigirl. waving