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A soul laid bare
A canvass laid bare calls out for a lover’s touch, longing for the caress of bristle and brush. A tentative stroke. Gentle caresses turn passionate and eager, until reaching crescendos that burgeon over with fever. Pores slaking up greedily emotions wash-ed over flesh, coming at last to a completion that’s half birth and half death. Sated on muddy palette lay dewy strands of soft sable hair. A full canvass, unvarnished for a soul that’s laid bare. Note: I’ll define some of the painting references so both meanings are clear to all, though many may not care about the artist angle. Lol! Wash: dilute Pallett: color mixing surface Soft sable hair: brush type Varnish: protective coat |
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Cold shower anyone?
 
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"half birth and half death"
You so nailed it, right there. |
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Beautiful. You have so many layers to this. Using the soul instead of the body for a theme lifts my thoughts and response to the art that we call life and the art of shared experience. Intimate, erotic and beautiful.
On the other hand I am just a coach with no clue about art. So if this is about favorite breakfast foods, animals in danger of extinction or the obvious advantages of Indiana as a vacation location then ignore my earlier comments. Seriously, amazing writing! |
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Edited by
LucyFay
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Thu 02/22/18 08:45 AM
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I didn’t realize anyone had posted. Lol!
48- Pornography was not the initial intent, but once half written I decided to roll with the double entendres. 
MelissaSue - I like it too...and tend to recycle the theme in most of my attempts at poetry. Lol! Thanks. 
Coach- You’re being kind and I appreciate it. You’re always kind. Thank you for the encoraging comments. Very sweet of you. 
And just in case you’re serious, it’s an emotional point of view of the painting process from start to finish. Lol! |
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A soul laid bare A canvass laid bare calls out for a lover’s touch, longing for the caress of bristle and brush. A tentative stroke. Gentle caresses turn passionate and eager, until reaching crescendos that burgeon over with fever. Pores slaking up greedily emotions wash-ed over flesh, coming at last to a completion that’s half birth and half death. Sated on muddy palette lay dewy strands of soft sable hair. A full canvass, unvarnished for a soul that’s laid bare. Note: I’ll define some of the painting references so both meanings are clear to all, though many may not care about the artist angle. Lol! Wash: dilute Pallett: color mixing surface Soft sable hair: brush type Varnish: protective coat 
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I didn’t realize anyone had posted. Lol! 48- Pornography was not the initial intent, but once half written I decided to roll with the double entendres.
MelissaSue - I like it too...and tend to recycle the theme in most of my attempts at poetry. Lol! Thanks.
Coach- You’re being kind and I appreciate it. You’re always kind. Thank you for the encoraging comments. Very sweet of you.
And just in case you’re serious, it’s an emotional point of view of the painting process from start to finish. Lol! Very serious and good to know.. :) |
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A soul laid bare A canvass laid bare calls out for a lover’s touch, longing for the caress of bristle and brush. A tentative stroke. Gentle caresses turn passionate and eager, until reaching crescendos that burgeon over with fever. Pores slaking up greedily emotions wash-ed over flesh, coming at last to a completion that’s half birth and half death. Sated on muddy palette lay dewy strands of soft sable hair. A full canvass, unvarnished for a soul that’s laid bare. Note: I’ll define some of the painting references so both meanings are clear to all, though many may not care about the artist angle. Lol! Wash: dilute Pallett: color mixing surface Soft sable hair: brush type Varnish: protective coat
Thanks Evans!
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I didn’t realize anyone had posted. Lol! 48- Pornography was not the initial intent, but once half written I decided to roll with the double entendres.
MelissaSue - I like it too...and tend to recycle the theme in most of my attempts at poetry. Lol! Thanks.
Coach- You’re being kind and I appreciate it. You’re always kind. Thank you for the encoraging comments. Very sweet of you.
And just in case you’re serious, it’s an emotional point of view of the painting process from start to finish. Lol! Very serious and good to know.. :) Lol! I didn’t think you really thought it was about breakfast food. Just being silly. Thank you Coach! Very glad you liked it. 
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I didn’t realize anyone had posted. Lol! 48- Pornography was not the initial intent, but once half written I decided to roll with the double entendres.
MelissaSue - I like it too...and tend to recycle the theme in most of my attempts at poetry. Lol! Thanks.
Coach- You’re being kind and I appreciate it. You’re always kind. Thank you for the encoraging comments. Very sweet of you.
And just in case you’re serious, it’s an emotional point of view of the painting process from start to finish. Lol! Very serious and good to know.. :) Lol! I didn’t think you really thought it was about breakfast food. Just being silly. Thank you Coach! Very glad you liked it.
Hmm.. breakfast food... well.. you could look.. darn.. nope I don't see that at all.. lol (now I am kidding.. :)) |
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