Topic: ex ACTLY
Unsane's photo
Sun 12/02/07 11:41 AM

i know what is going on here. i know
ex ACTLY
what it is you want.

heh. no.
nonono.
you think I
have the answers?

please.

without such ambiguity
i dont know if i could BREATHE
let alone concede your little(oh
how so little)victories.

cause, well, maybe i could
find a common ground
for us to lay our little, heh,
'intricacies' upon.

maybe i could forgive you.
maybe i could find a reason to
interperet what you call 'compassion'
as anything but YET

another reason
for wide-eyed time
brain dead
or seconds upon hours
feigning sleep
so others think im
at peace.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 12/02/07 01:09 PM
drinker good write...

Unsane's photo
Sun 12/02/07 07:04 PM
thank ya teddy bear. :tongue:

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/02/07 08:21 PM
little victories ad up though... don't they...

nice words

no photo
Mon 12/03/07 08:54 AM
GREAT WORDS, POWERFUL ENDING.flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 12/03/07 08:58 AM
Wow I agree, great wordsflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:35 AM
Very nice enjoyed it flowerforyou

Unsane's photo
Mon 12/03/07 09:59 AM
thanks guys. this is one of my recent favorites.