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This is in dedication to two people....
Songtress...the one I cherish and love through eternity. LAMoM..Denise, you gave us this line to work with and it is more or less yours too. I hope you like what I have done with your line. Beauty Of Two Souls Your strength lies within my heart Your faith within my soul, Your love says we'll never part Your guidance is our goal. Our hope is ever enduring Our pasts will stay behind, The beauty of two souls Are blending in time. Once more we are united Our hearts became as one, All fears and doubts ignited Are all erased and gone. The hands of time are ticking away Like the movement of a mime, The beauty of two souls Are blending in time. |
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I can see the images of two souls entwined together as they rise above and disappear together through the mist. This came out beautifully..proud of you as always.
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lovely
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Edited by
nanafry
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Sat 12/01/07 07:59 AM
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! |
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After all you are my muse sweetheart...
Thanks peachie...that was sweet of you |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhh Heavenly (((( RObert ))))) My heart sings,,, I am so happy to see love in your eyes and flow from your heart,,, Hugs to you both ...
Love Mom |
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Thank you that was real sweet of you
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Very good wording and thoughts...
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Thanks iam4u...I give some credit to MOM...she gave me the idea with the title...and the one I love.
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Awwwww beautiful indeed
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Thanks Krisi...All it takes is the muse for the words and me to let em flow.
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Thanks Krisi...All it takes is the muse for the words and me to let em flow. And it is my pleasure to be your muse. Very proud of your poems. |
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Thanks Krisi...All it takes is the muse for the words and me to let em flow. And it is my pleasure to be your muse. Very proud of your poems. I couldn't have done it without you my love. |
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I couldn't have done it without you my love. Yes you could have. You just needed a reason. |
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The poem is a beautiful one , indeed.
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Thank you wouldee...I appreciate it.
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Isn't he good y'all..of course I am prejudice ...just a wee bit.
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yes you are
prejudice but i have to agree with you... wolf |
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Thanks Kc...I appreciate your comment. I have the muse for those words.
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